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I found I liked him better as soon as I started thinking of him as just a colossal jerk who happen to be a magic bird. As opposed to, say, Bald Eagle Satan.

Otherwise, very good stuff. This devil, though minor, would make for a memorable campaign. Eagles see everything, man! There's a million ways they could mess with you. Go to Comment

I counted 96... I don't really know how to vote on something like this, if I even should vote. Will probably refrain. Go to Comment

Update: Do not reuse:
Combusting Shrews Lifeforms By: Wogden Delete
Corpse Flower Lifeforms By: Michael Jotne Slayer Delete
Crystal Hornets Lifeforms By: Cheka Man Delete
Crystal Rose Lifeforms By: valadaar Delete
Dark Unicorn Lifeforms By: Mourngrymn Delete
Darken Glade Locations By: Grendel Delete
Destinen Wood Locations By: Wulfhere Delete
Mastwood Island Locations By: valadaar Delete
Medusa Tree Lifeforms By: manfred Delete
Satur Nox Locations By: Scrasamax Delete
Sorcery Springs Geyser Basin Locations By: Cheka Man Delete
The BlackWater Tunnels Locations By: Siren no Orakio Delete
The Field of 10,000 Skulls Locations By: Wulfhere Delete
The Headsman NPCs By: valadaar Delete
The Hell of Dry Bones Locations By: Scrasamax Delete
The Land of Green Death Locations By: Wulfhere Delete
The Leviathan Pool Locations By: Murometz Delete
The Lightning-Struck Tower Locations By: Wulfhere Delete
The Turgid Sands of Nesseraum Locations By: Murometz Delete
The Wastes Locations By: MoonHunter Delete
Thorn Rolls Lifeforms By: MoonHunter Delete
Unknown Death Lifeforms By: MoonHunter Delete
Vox Piscis Locations By: Murometz Delete
Ylithain, the Drowned Queen Lifeforms By: EchoMirage Delet Go to Comment

I like the progression of paladins and to know they are all corrupted or being corrupted is probably the main idea I came away with. Otherwise it is a bit confusing and not fully explained so after a single read I really don't understand quite a bit of it still.

So the sword gives them evil powers somehow that corrupt them? If a paladin doesn't wield the sword, are they still affected? I guess my main confusion is in the "deception" because I just don't get how it works. And the link to the throne seems important but not really revealed...as well as the spirits around it. Seemed cool, but didn't get those either. The children are the Paladins?

Seems like there is a cool idea there, but I just can't put it all together in my head with the evidence given. Sorry. I didn't even get the euthenizing part, although I see it where that could have came from.

I need some of it written with big letters and crayon for me. Go to Comment

It took me a couple of reads to ubderstand what was happening in here properly, but that's probably because I'm on my phone and i missed a part :p

So the paladinhood or priesthood offer a euthenizing service for those who are downtrodden, with a fictional reward on the 'other side'. Very manipulative!

I would imagine that this church will be -very - into the death penalty too, for even minor crimes if they can get away with it; through beheading with the blessed blade, of course. Perhaps with the reasoning that "they have strayed and are beyond redemption, so we give them another chance in the green fields of paradise" or something to that effect.
I like the idea behind it, and also the idea of the tiered paladinhood, with different levels of knowledge of the Ruth. Go to Comment

I'll do that. At the very least it should be capitalized. Go to Comment

I can't say I've ever seen a trifold order of paladins before. It's very cool that three differently-aligned warriors can serve the same god AND derive powers from him.

The intro could use a little cleaning up, even just a sentence or two giving us the basic concept up front, because it's a little confusing as is. In the third paragraph, for instance, where you are talking about "perishing on the blade", I thought that you were referring to *any* blade, and that ALL deaths by a sword were in Krununth's domain.

But seriously though -- kudos for the idea. It's one I haven't seen before! Go to Comment

i like this idea. You've given enough information to make an whole campaign and one that could keep your PC's thinking and working together. Go to Comment

Only voted. Go to Comment

It is what it is: A solid list of names :)

Or, it will be when we get some more into it! :D I'll delve through my subs and pull up a few for addition to this! I may have to be reminded to do this, though :p Go to Comment

I notice going through this that I favour short names - one or two syllables.
They're not sorted perfectly, and there may be a duplication or two, but these are the names I gleaned from my posts of yore.

Poxxin - A Town name.
Ixxil - Male
Jhalk - Male
Murtez - Male
Krondell - Male
Brother Hukkel - Male
Raun - Male
Podd - Male
Mull - Male
Rouse - Female
Azalea - Male, angelic
Zalentoah - Male, angelic
Nazrem - Female
Jaimev Ulkeav - Male
Dermond Jaged - Male
Axtrami - God, Male, Female
Ouzquin Dremorix - Society/race
Ionilas - Town name
Vanitos - God
Hurani - Female
Durmanigar - Town
Ilken Lillet - Female
Kote - Male
Maltuka - Town
Valdus Darkmour - Male
Animus - Male
Gaeric - Male
Xarlith - Male, Draconic
Tarquin - Male
Gandacai - Creature
Lister Otticus - Male
Cables Auligra - Male
Scable - Creature
Sarlin Church - Male
Mogrolyth - Creature
Linn Lightson - Male
Khalrani- Male
Rasp - Male
Goli - Male, God
Nurin - Male
Lenith - Male
Karea - Female
Durimar - Male
Heu'valis - Male, Demonic
Fue'mar - Male
Demolius Ghith - Male

From The Ouzquin Dremorix compendium:
Moruz - male
Xartina - Female
Barhaki - Male
Scarlin - Male
Balrin - Male
Naraku - Male
Dermond Jaged - Male
Ilariel - Unique Weapon
Luid - Unique Weapon
Hembali - Unique Weapon
Axer Adrami - Unique Weapon
Loen - Unique Weapon
Xactaki - Unique Weapon
Tarax - Unique weapon
Vaxatra - Unique weapon
Karyla - Female
Jazranika - Female
Inistiz - Male
Nimbi - Female
Gaxatir - Female
Elusimau the Harper - Male
Narine - Female
Hainis- Male

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Done! Threw up my names into the sub! Go to Comment

Very practical. Like PA, I'd like to see some categories. Go to Comment

The following is from a text file on my backup drive simply entitled "names":

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Truganius
Jurnellion
Scilpus
Quitilo
Dentonia
Quiranius
Ziurquic
Saenaetelox
Tiago
Megildur
Vanauter
Kirn
Tyrn
Kirt
Neraint
Farathgol
Ardanath Selgard
Quetz
Eloria Noyesi
Gnisnal Cetla
Rasauq
Neelloc Sumaes
Darth Flammus
Darth Malus
Darth Mortis
Darth Nex/Nexis
Darth Morbus
Darth Odiosus
Rage Frost
Swift Water
Nikita & Tikita
Heliodor
Schorl
Realgar
Trona
Natron
Morion
Larimar
Galena
Coltan
Baron Alaan Alios
Baeleric
Ahrgan
Threll
Kess
Barast
Adsair Typhaeus Go to Comment

I will make no quips about the white-space (though a few come to mind). This would be an amazing sub some day when we have thousands of names here!! Will add my rogues gallery!! Good idea, val! Go to Comment

this is a fun idea Go to Comment

This listing is from a name generator I made in python, available on request. I used the name list above to create the name-pieces, so the names have a similar flavor.

Unam	Murima	Xilur	Oparrden
Forost	Unest	Forild	Shaannthri
Trebild	Forelz	Tryaelf	Asham
Yuopppan	Tryoppzer	Karen	Amur
Urunwick	Breorn	Breost	Vosast
Valopp	Motevn	Astann	Kithast
Jonentrden	Evnam	Breethross	Opur
Drost	Ethast	Craash	Xakoppara
Uthava	Varevn	Goluth	Fuler
Tryer	Graenross	Varam	Tanann
Kareth	Groavaning	Avaann	Maruth
Groast	Ildost	Jonun	Sahent
Herun	Motunen	Tanoy	Beima
Arashale	Sheamara	Ranoybaar	Jarop
Morevn	Motannpan	Vleost	Jarur
Maraelf	Draelf	Kithasthus	Yethopp
Jarer	Jarar	Redar	Murornross
Evnorn	Sahost	Menop	Avaethbaar
Meuth	Estornburn	Valur	Yuann
Kothild	Caer	Opaelf	Jarath
Kithava	Ostath	Talar	Vosashthus
Myurwick	Arerburn	Muram	Motam
Turen	Varath	Harar	Entash
Bekestthri	Maramorran	Arima	Tellorn
Yuann	Melash	Astoy	Amamnnell

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Update: Going to chase Strolens about the formatting... :) Go to Comment