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The Vile Vial
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-05-08 07:17 AM
This is one 100 word challenge which I think would have had much more potential expanded.- at the moment it just appears to be a general thrown potion which will cause weakness and possible blindness, and perhaps suffocation.
I get the feeling that you are maybe trying to suggest that the goop is somewhat sentient/intelligent and will intentionally soak anything it's thrown at, but i feel it's not explained enough in the post.
I'd like to know where the goop came from: Is it a tar-like chemical mixture? Is it a stoppered sludge-creature? Is is a mixture of herbs/reagents?

The Vile Vial is a cool name, however! I know it defeats the purpose of the 100-word post, but more info would be awesome. Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2014-03-11 03:12 PM
Did you take it from in-work to regular? That spits it out onto the front page.

I think this might have been better left a 100. It's short and kind of fun, but for a full sub it doesn't have a lot to it. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2013-05-10 06:40 PM
Now see, i read the name (great name) and figured the vial *itself* would be vile. In other words, an evil, sentient glass container that can either corrupt whichever liquid (magical or otherwise) is placed inside, or worse yet, it doesn't mater whats inside! You can throw the vile vial at a fleshy opponent, and upon breaking, the glass shards worm their way and "crawl" deep inside flesh, severing arteries and causing great damage otherwise. Later, the glass shards seek each other out again, and re-form the glass vial, complete with evil sentience again. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 10:55 AM
Update: Spring Cleaning time. In case anyone wonders, this item is a take on the Jarate jar from Team Fortress 2, a game I have spent faar to many hours upon. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 01:47 PM
I think it is an easy guess what my handle might be. :)


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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 02:12 PM
No, its a 100 word challenge sub. I chopped out about half the original words to make it fit :)
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 07:40 AM
Perhaps I'll de-100 it sometime in the future. Consider it a psychotic amoeba with a limited lifespan once unbottled :)

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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 06:56 PM
Interesting :P A sentiant vial? Who's believe that! Sheesh! :)

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valadaar's comment on 2014-03-11 10:44 AM


Update: Cleaned it up a little, casting it back out into the world.



Not quite sure _why_ it is showing up on the main page.

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Ted's comment on 2013-05-07 01:42 PM
I might just need your steam handle Valadaar so I may attempt to backstab you. Go to Comment
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Kassy's comment on 2013-05-18 07:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Dossta's comment on 2013-05-14 03:59 PM
Like the description you used for this one, though I agree it would be more interesting if expanded. For a 100-word, it's not bad. Go to Comment
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-05-07 02:05 PM
....Is this a work in progress or what? Go to Comment
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-05-07 02:14 PM
Ah, I see I missed that fine print at the top there. Go to Comment
The Blackwings
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manfred's comment on 2014-02-09 12:32 PM
A pretty colorful flock, these guys, and not exactly sympathetic!

Given their manipulative nature and tendency not to abuse others just for the sake of it, I would imagine a surprising number of their slaves might see them as good masters (at least compared to others...). There may be even rumors circulating among the most oppressed about how misunderstood Blackwings really are - likely spread by the Blackwings themselves. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2014-02-07 09:47 AM
I dig these guys, and think it is interesting how much predetermination there is in their society, and I like the notion of these gaunt creatures keeping packs of slaves to do their bidding.

Good work. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2014-02-10 11:44 AM
They remind me slightly of Changelings in their looks. *imagines what a town of theirs would be like-houses that one flew up to, preventing other races from burgling their homes, for example* What is their equivalent of Christmas? Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2014-02-10 11:44 AM
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Dozus's comment on 2014-02-07 10:18 AM
The caste system is well thought out. Like you describe, they do seem a very cold-hearted race.

You mentioned it's common for Blackwings to keep slaves. Do they enslave fellow Blackwings, or other races, or both? Go to Comment
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Dozus's comment on 2014-02-07 10:18 AM
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