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Lightning Steel & Sundries
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-07-22 08:49 PM
So this is what magic swords are made of. :) 5/5 Go to Comment
Lightning Steel & Sundries
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-18 03:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Pieh's comment on 2014-07-09 03:49 PM
A decent submission. It certainly inspires dreams of a seafaring campaign and, like mentioned, could work well with some of Cheka's content.

I love crab people. A shipwreck flotilla home for them made by a magical whale is so much fun. Thank you. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2014-11-02 02:47 AM
What Cheka said. They would fit well into any aquatic setting and would do an excellent job of adding to the general myths surrounding the sea. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-06-30 08:49 PM
The evil shark people link is broken, but I like this idea, but I just happen to like the idea of whales as being more powerful and a threat to humanity, rather than it's victim. I can see the black leviathans coexisting in varying states of peace and war with things like Cheka's krakens.

Nicely done. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-30 09:23 PM
They would fit well in the Acqua setting. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-30 09:24 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-30 01:43 PM
Update: Out with ye - Cult of Done! Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-30 09:15 PM
Its not broke - it was a filler link that didn't get filled..

Guess I'll need to fix it :)
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The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-09 03:51 PM
Pieh? Wow! :)
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The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-01 07:33 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-02 10:45 AM
Maybe the king is a recent one rather then one long past? Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2014-06-02 08:57 PM
It is simple and to the point. The information is given sparsely to tune it to ones own group or campaign with ease. I rather like it. I found myself thinking of Hellgate and how this is almost a like minded prison/ forgotten realm of similar torture. I wished for more information but realized it was very bare bones and didn't really need much more regarding information I couldn't fill out myself.

I like it val. Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
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valadaar's comment on 2014-05-30 12:00 PM
cult of done. Begone.

Will fix the ? in the title tonight. Why did it do that?
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The Falling Castle
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-31 04:38 AM
4.0/5

What I would like to know is in what way will the deep madness and evil of the place affect the PC's?

A good sub with lots of dark potential. Well done val. I'll wait patiently for an audience with the King. Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-31 04:38 AM
Devil's Advocate

There might not be many people that enjoy playing an evil character, but say the party is evil. There's plenty of fun for them here. Especially with Sir Hindril. Go to Comment
Yarnuks
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-05-04 11:48 PM
You can eat that

As long as yarnuk expeditions to the surface are rare, and the only members of their race encountered are the defective cast offs, people are probably going to do with them what they already do with lobsters. I don't see this being a problem, since defective or not, if there are more than enough of them in an area, they are going to breed, and there aren't many ocean creatures in shallow water that are going to be able to kill a one ton lobster with basic intelligence.

I can imagine the horror when a deep snailship surfaces near a coastal village, and the yarnuk explorers discover that the exiles have been captured, and are being bred, and worst of all, they are being eaten. Their boiled shells are polished into jewelry, and the undesirable innards are dumped into the water for scavengers to consume. Juveniles feeding on the discarded viscera of their own kin? Cannibalism, and murder?

This cannot go unchallenged... Go to Comment
Yarnuks
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-21 07:50 PM


Sci-fi spell jammers in the deep. I love it. I think we discussed this before in chat: but i like the idea of these beings, and I think it adds different dimension of the setting. By writing from the perspective of one these beings you could use more hard science in you descriptions of life forms and structures. For example you could discuss things in terms of wavelength and ionic attractions ( stuff a being from a crashed spaceship could be aware of), and just having these in the setting expands the setting immensely.



The write up is a little terse. Almost like bullet points. What happened the Valadaar of six or eight years ago that opened up his posts with little in-world first person vignettes?

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Yarnuks
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-22 07:01 AM


Check out the Vorrkush sub



It is another mystical deep dwelling arthropod of Decathros with a Lovecraft vibe.

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Yarnuks
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Silveressa's comment on 2014-04-22 12:02 AM
It reminds me slightly of the Cuthulhu mythology of the deep ones, but has a much more usable origin and some interesting concepts.

I do have to agree with Axle however, in that it feels a bit brief, and I would enjoy reading more about their culture and other unique aspects of their race. (Do they forge metals using geothermal vents?) As for the vignette, that too would be a welcome addition. Go to Comment
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