I agree with SE: certainly short and sweet. I liked the Entwiners (although not sure whether I officially voted on it) and I like the idea of the Spirit Nets. I also think the first sample seems like the strongest entry among the three. Go to Comment
Y'know the thing about scalable hive intellects, is that once they reach critical mass, in theory, they no longer pose a problem because they become so smart that they figure out a way to become pure energy or something, become pacifists and what not.
Though it seems like these ones starts out as energy?
I could definately see these as evolving additional forms, like humanoids to fill infiltration purposes and what not, but they don't seem to have much motivation other than curiousity, though in truth that could go a long way. Some kind of study humans or the effects of an apocalyptic event on humans. Something along that line to make em a long term campaign threat, they could start out as seemingly a mindless natural force and then evolve. Go to Comment
The imageries work in this piece but I would rather like to see it expanded. Currently, it's a great flavour/inspiration piece but I think there's more potential to it. Still, one can't expect too much from an Oekaki. Go to Comment
A-Trill-ia, this seems a waste to go and destroy; but a Mad Warlock (Male Witch) could make this a new layer of Limbo, if only he could gather a coven to do it...
Abner Vext has gathered three green hags, only seven more to go? Go to Comment
A good 10, up to your usual high standards. Might want to give the sub once over though to check links eg. Orthacarium was in suggested submission but no link to it in main text; Likewise, no link for Darkwater. Go to Comment