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Lutazum the Tortoise
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-13 10:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-08 11:51 AM
Nicely done. This giant divine turtle has changed its ecology and the villager's social ecology, thus the critter has impacted its world. Go to Comment
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Maggot's comment on 2006-09-08 08:50 AM
How does the beast understand commands given to it? Is it able to truly understand human speech? I would just to like have that little mystery answered. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-08 08:16 AM
Nice work val. I love the image of the slow and deliberate tortoise and its novel usage and near veneration by the local races. Kudos on the names. Go to Comment
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Psalmanazar's comment on 2006-10-09 01:58 PM
Love it. LOVE it. The Image of the Giant Tortoise, covered in leather satchels, just sort of plodding along, grazing from its gardens; the relationship that he has with the Hanaset; even the sort of Native American feel of the Hanaset themselves- everything just seems to come together on this. 5/5.

BTW- The Hanaset fascinate me- I'm imagining them as a sort of North American Indian-style culture, with limited technology but really complex politics and philosophy, a la the Tlingit/ Haudenosaunee/ Cherokee- that right? I wouldn't half mind seeing a write-up on them, valadaar, if you ever get around to it. Go to Comment
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Psalmanazar's comment on 2006-10-17 11:37 AM
Ace. Ace. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-13 10:00 PM
HOLY FLYING MONKEYFLEAS Batman!!! Great job valadaar. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-07 10:10 PM
valadaar, this is my favorite post of yours so far.

Love the lead-in, the quirky details, and the Great Lutazum itself! Love the 'Tili' part!

What does it eat? I'm guessing obscene amounts of vegetation

Wow, I have a soft spot for big-ass weird creatures, tribes that revere them, and all the mysteries and unanswered questions that swirl around them. The only reason I dont give top marks is that I needed just a little more info on this beast. Otherwise, its great!! I will use Tili Lutazum in game-play. Thanks! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-08 12:31 PM
hmmm..well, just more info, you know? :D

Plus as manfred mentioned, some tightening up of the formatting and spelling and stuff.

Otherwise, Great! Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2007-08-30 10:49 AM
Bumping the coolest Tortoise of all time. Yeah, the mail delivery thing is priceless. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2012-02-23 09:54 PM


How is this not one of your "top 20" rated subs? Wow


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axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-17 07:46 PM
Brilliant!

Man, I love the story's you use to write into your subs.

The "Can I take that back" plot made me smile

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axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-18 01:23 PM
now in the top 20 muro. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-08 08:36 AM
What would you like to know about it? :) Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-08 12:52 PM
Updated: Spellchecked - wow, I can't spell :) Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-10 10:53 AM
Updated: Added some details as to it's origin. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 11:36 AM
Am working on it. It will likely be a big Codex when I'm done with it... Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-01-17 07:14 AM
Thanks Manfred!

Heh, I'll bet it's been a while for ol' Lutazum. Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-12-04 09:52 PM
An excellent piece; it combines pure, whimsical fantasy with quirky touches of realism.

I didn't realize that I never voted on him. Go to Comment
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-18 01:01 PM
This goes into my next Everway game. Go to Comment
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