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Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 11:36 AM
Am working on it. It will likely be a big Codex when I'm done with it... Go to Comment
Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2007-01-17 07:14 AM
Thanks Manfred!

Heh, I'll bet it's been a while for ol' Lutazum. Go to Comment
Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Wulfhere's comment on 2006-12-04 09:52 PM
An excellent piece; it combines pure, whimsical fantasy with quirky touches of realism.

I didn't realize that I never voted on him. Go to Comment
Lutazum the Tortoise
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-18 01:01 PM
This goes into my next Everway game. Go to Comment
Demontrumpets
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
manfred's comment on 2006-09-08 02:47 AM
This is what I like. A simple plant or creature with many surprising impacts, suited for worlds that have contact with otherworldly evil. Yes, a bit on the D&D-ish side, but still not bad. Not bad at all! Go to Comment
Demontrumpets
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-08 09:02 AM
Interesting expansion of the plant. The contamination of the region might mutate various plants and lifeforms around it. Thus we could get "evil animated trees", corrupted animals, and other dark forest tropes. Go to Comment
Demontrumpets
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-08 08:23 AM
The unintended consequences plot hook is my favorite and I like the fact that the plant isn't dripping with Abyssal 'boojums', rather, just has a few quirks that put together give it a very otherworldly feel. Go to Comment
Demontrumpets
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-07 07:48 PM
I really like this evil plant.What does unholy water do? Go to Comment
Demontrumpets
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2006-09-08 09:20 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Demontrumpets
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-07 08:12 PM
Sorry, Was being D&D Centric- figured all game systems used it to some degree or other.

It will cause minor injury to especially Good aligned beings, such as Clerics, Paladins, and most supernatural Good creatures (Unicorns, etc), similar to a vial of acid.

Holy water (the reverse) injures Undead, demons, evil Clerics, etc (It BURNS!!!!! It Burns!!!! Nasty Holy Water...) :) Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
manfred's comment on 2006-09-07 12:54 PM
Heh-heh. Now this is a demon that makes sense, unlike those stupid Evil(tm) cardboard types. Potentially useful, but you will know soon why one should not summon demons. Neat. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-07 12:54 PM
Why is this a lifeform rather than an NPC? It should have the freetext of "demon" to link it to the other demons.

Other than that, it is good servicable submission. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-07 02:05 PM
I like him-a Demon of Greed. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-09-07 01:56 PM
While I agree that this really doesn't fit into the lifeform challenge it is a very good rendition of a nastly little demon. I love the idea of a demon compelled by something other than hate, rage, hate, and death. makes for interesting dealings when one is summoned and it shows up indtead. Good job valadaar.

My only complaint is a littl more informtion on the demon itself and possibly a hint at what he has contained in the sack. What does he do with the coins and treasure he finds and loots? Holds them in his sack or does he ever pull them out to count them? Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-09-07 02:10 PM
Its not really unique. He is a demon. Ok, nothing new there. He is greedy, albeit different typ of greed, nothing new there. All demons want something for little. Death, souls, virgins, etc... this one just wants money. So it is different and unique but not shatteringly so. But thats just me. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-09-07 04:18 PM
Not to toot my own horn but I did a group of half demons called the Taur, while some were what you would think of when dealing with a demon, others were not. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-09-07 04:25 PM
That is a tough question to ask me as I view thing different. That is like asking me what my definition of a sentient being is. Some say all conscious creatures are sentient, but my view of that is sentient creatures can evolve, usually talk to some degree that is understandable, and create. A dog can do none of those that are understandable by others outside magic. Hence a dog is not sentient.

The same thing applies here for me. An NPC is an individual creature with a personality. If you put it in an adventure there would be only one, being unique as NPC’s are. A life form is a community, a race, a group of creatures that adhere to the same rules. Dogs for instance, cats, sheep, and rust monsters are all life forms. But that’s my view, NPC’s are unique and life forms are a community of the same race that is not sentient.

In this situation a unique life form, in my opinion would not be sentient. A dog with a cat head for instance, but only one left. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Dozus's comment on 2006-09-07 04:42 PM
An archetype of greed. Good description, for some reason it evokes images of Japanese demons (maybe it's just me). Nothing n ere, true, but it was done all right enough. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2006-09-07 06:45 PM
what manfred said. Go to Comment
Aarvachi
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-07 10:56 AM
Updated: Quotes messed up Go to Comment
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