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Iron Spike Golem
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Nobody's comment on 2006-12-05 01:30 PM
3.0 - Good Solid Idea Go to Comment
Iron Spike Golem
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-10-07 07:07 AM
Scrasamax envisions a writhing tentacle of rusty iron spikes battering people about, exploding into theface of unarmored mages and rogues, doing all sorts of horrible things, like leaving bloody corpses pinned to the wall. You are an evil, evil man Val.

Kudos. Go to Comment
Iron Spike Golem
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-10-06 08:55 PM
I really like this creature. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-10-07 09:20 AM
I think the write up on this could have been so much better, but kudos for bringing it out. This is odd enough to make it worth reading and gives enough tid bits to flesh out for individual settings. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-12-05 02:40 PM
You know. Possibly a little backstory of the reason why or how it came into being. A little flesh to this iron golem would go a long way. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-10-07 08:53 AM
Good Job val. The creature by itself is pretty basic, but with the 101 things to do with a spike thread it gains a new meaning. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-10-06 08:10 PM
A worthy guardian for the 101 Spikes scroll! Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-10-25 07:26 AM
You an ebil, ebil man val.
What a sub, *falls to floor writhing in insane laughter*
The things you could do with one of tose are almost endless... Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-07 10:43 AM
Agreed, but I was striking while the Iron was hot :)

Suggestions on beefing it up? Go to Comment
Iron Spike Golem
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-07 08:34 PM
I definately take that as a compliment :) Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-03-19 05:49 PM
With the -Jack sub, it could be called a Scrapjack! :) Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-06-20 08:55 AM
This is giving me some more ideas.... Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2013-09-17 12:42 PM
Update: Cleaned up a little and touched up the formatting a tad. Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-10-06 11:10 PM
"Arrrigt mens! Dis ratte bastah, he theenk he a goona cornair de market on de Espikes de Ferro! We agonna estoppe eem! We goeen in de towair an we agonna swipe he beeg pile o espikes!"

You're an evil, evil man. Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-06-19 08:53 PM
I still love this one! Go to Comment
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Fallen Angel's comment on 2008-09-08 12:32 AM
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Elbin's comment on 2013-05-29 02:33 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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young0ne2's comment on 2013-09-17 12:21 PM
very nice idea Go to Comment
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Longspeak's comment on 2013-09-17 05:16 PM
A really neat twist on a monster I've always found pretty boring. This is interesting, and looks like it'll be a lot of fun to throw at my players. Go to Comment
Kadarin
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-10-04 12:55 PM
Those are characters are specifically attached to a specific game on the site. That is why they have mechanics. Other than that, most of this is pointless for most gamers... as most of us here DO NOT PLAY D20. I could post up Fantasy Hero or Ars Magica stats and specials and confuse the rest of you too. That is why everything needs to be described (IN WORDS) to make it adaptable.

A couple of things you can do:
If you have to list the mechanics (to which I would say, "try not to"), list everything as a description first. That way you have a thicker write up AND the character become equipment specific.

The format is uneven. You need to add more character returns at the end of paragraphs. You need to remove them from the middle of sentences and paragraphs. If you are going to line return at the end of each quote/ piece of dialog, you need to do it consistantly throughout the post.

Even if your character is new, you can have a lot more descriptive and motivational elements to his write up.

Nobody cares about generic equipment that most of us would assume he has. And we are going to adapt any standing orders to how we will use him as an NPC, so do not waste your time on them. Remember, you are posting up an NPC (even though it is your PC), so you need to make it useful to GMs. Go to Comment
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