I appreciate the feedback, and of course I have a few return comments, though I agree with you in the main.
It was intended as a fortress and as a submission for the War quest, so my mind was not focused so much on peaceful or quirky encounters, though the sub would benefit from their inclusion - and I am looking forward to your additions :) Go to Comment
Top notch material. It's rare that I see material with enough quality and depth that it should make it into a book of it's own, but this submission does exactly that. My only real beef with the submission is that the formatting which allows it to be posted actually detracts from it's readability, which is a mark of it's high quality and usability. While I seldom recommend it, this is exactly the kind of material that needs to be published for gaming. Go to Comment