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Yethamerand
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-08 05:51 PM
This feels like an epic idea given the stub treatment. Go to Comment
The Eye of Avarice
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Cheka Man's comment on 2012-06-19 10:27 AM
Very unique. Go to Comment
The Eye of Avarice
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2012-06-18 07:44 PM
Greedy, baby Beholders!

I like the Motivation blurb a lot. Each one can be uniquely ambitious, cunning and conniving. I immediately picture a sycophantic Eye latching on to the party, for some reason, then dove-tailing into Eye for an Eye plot-hook.

Good to see you posting again, val!

Plot Hooks titles are fun to make-up for these...The Eyes Have It, Eye'll Be Seeing You, Mud in your Eye...etc Now I'll have to think up some of the actual hooks for these Go to Comment
The Eye of Avarice
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Kassy's comment on 2012-06-20 04:16 AM
I like the way the 'strength' of the eyes powers depend on the hosts suitability/compatibility.

A fun read. It would be interesting to see Eyers Remorse being played as part of a campaign.

4.5/5 and congratulations on a new sub! Go to Comment
The Eye of Avarice
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-19 12:48 AM
A solid submission that covers all pertinent angles, with flavour text inserted just where they are needed. Overall, a high quality piece. Go to Comment
The Eye of Avarice
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
MysticMoon's comment on 2012-06-19 10:24 PM
This is one of those subs that begs to be used in a game. I look forward to seeing more about the "Adult Eyes." Go to Comment
30 Treasures of the Citadel
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-06-13 09:19 AM
Update: Moonsilk Go to Comment
WorkingArea2
Systems  (Political)   (Historical)
valadaar's comment on 2012-04-05 09:57 AM


 



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By: valadaar




More then a hundred years ago - after the battle which created the City of the Swamp, a crocodile, already large by any account, devoured a nearly-destroyed 'thing', one of the weapons of either the city, or it's enemy.  This was not the end of it, and instead of simply becoming food for the great beast, it joined and fused with it.



 



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More then a hundred years ago - after the battle which created the City of the Swamp, a crocodile, already large by any account, devoured a nearly-destroyed 'thing', one of the weapons of either the city, or it's enemy.  This was not the end of it, and instead of simply becoming food for the great beast, it joined and fused with it.



It weakness had shattered its mind, preventing it from taking over the croc. Instead, the being exists as a passenger within the Croc, seeing and experiencing everything it does.  It does lend a degree of supernatural power to the Croc, which is how it has survived in the ruins of the city for so long.  It is one the reasons The Pack is no longer as powerful as it once was, attacking from below the water and dragging pack members under.



 



 


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The Carved Kingdom-
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Scrasamax's comment on 2012-01-19 08:03 AM


They are going to make new mountains to replace the ones lost to ahem monumental erosion?


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The Carved Kingdom-
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
axlerowes's comment on 2012-01-21 06:53 PM


 



I really like it, I like the prose style as well.  So they are going tear down the statues and quarry new stone replace them.   



A brave man to show free verse poetry to crass obvious gamers


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The Carved Kingdom-
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
valadaar's comment on 2012-01-14 06:47 PM


  My attempt at this style, with a bit of odd prose to boot.


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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-05-08 07:17 AM
This is one 100 word challenge which I think would have had much more potential expanded.- at the moment it just appears to be a general thrown potion which will cause weakness and possible blindness, and perhaps suffocation.
I get the feeling that you are maybe trying to suggest that the goop is somewhat sentient/intelligent and will intentionally soak anything it's thrown at, but i feel it's not explained enough in the post.
I'd like to know where the goop came from: Is it a tar-like chemical mixture? Is it a stoppered sludge-creature? Is is a mixture of herbs/reagents?

The Vile Vial is a cool name, however! I know it defeats the purpose of the 100-word post, but more info would be awesome. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-10 06:40 PM
Now see, i read the name (great name) and figured the vial *itself* would be vile. In other words, an evil, sentient glass container that can either corrupt whichever liquid (magical or otherwise) is placed inside, or worse yet, it doesn't mater whats inside! You can throw the vile vial at a fleshy opponent, and upon breaking, the glass shards worm their way and "crawl" deep inside flesh, severing arteries and causing great damage otherwise. Later, the glass shards seek each other out again, and re-form the glass vial, complete with evil sentience again. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 10:55 AM
Update: Spring Cleaning time. In case anyone wonders, this item is a take on the Jarate jar from Team Fortress 2, a game I have spent faar to many hours upon. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 01:47 PM
I think it is an easy guess what my handle might be. :)


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The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-07 02:12 PM
No, its a 100 word challenge sub. I chopped out about half the original words to make it fit :)
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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-08 07:40 AM
Perhaps I'll de-100 it sometime in the future. Consider it a psychotic amoeba with a limited lifespan once unbottled :)

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The Vile Vial
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-10 06:56 PM
Interesting :P A sentiant vial? Who's believe that! Sheesh! :)

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The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Ted's comment on 2013-05-07 01:42 PM
I might just need your steam handle Valadaar so I may attempt to backstab you. Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-18 07:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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