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Boots of the Asrok
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-13 11:21 AM
A nice solid item, with a nice twist in the back story. A balanced item that makes good sense.

Dodging the filter is not that bad, though one should find more creative means to express the same ideas.

You should of made both of those "quoted materials" submissions in their own right, or make them shortly. Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-11 12:33 PM
An interesting read with a variety of elements, economics of proper enchantment of the boots to the modern idea of humanity forcing other species out of their home ranges, and then taking them for their base components. i would like to see a submission about the Asrok themselves, and possibly this Theos Theocracy.

Unfortunaltey, the inclusion of symbols to sidestep the profanity filters is unappealing to the eye. for that I have to dock 1/2 a point. Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-11 01:25 PM
These will get my HOH today. Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-11 10:11 PM
sings *Dem boots are made for walking* Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-11 09:23 PM
what manfred said, and I love them! Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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axlerowes's comment on 2014-03-22 12:07 PM
Call of the Wild Boots!

I never saw the original but I respect and admire every choice you made in the write up as it stands now. The boots could be written up and used in a game with just the first and the last section. But instead you took a relatively minor magical item, all be it a dangerous one, and used it to tell a story. Nice. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 12:41 PM
I'm planning on adding more - this post was a leaf with no branches (yet).

Docking half a point for a couple of odd characters seems a bit extreme, given how many other posts are filled with enough accent characters to choke a horse.

But then again, I'm not supposed to comment on how people vote, considering how mad I get when someone does that to me. So, lesson learned. I will substitute acceptable words for profanity (even though I think it has it's place). Already done on this post. Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 01:04 PM
I removed them as soon as I got Scrasamax's comment. Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-13 12:51 PM
They are currently implemented as a form of stub - the targets are public in work.
And they will be filled out more as time allows.

Edit- The Asrok have now been detailed. Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-20 02:32 PM
Updated: Added freetext Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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the Wanderer's comment on 2006-12-12 08:02 PM
Nicely done! I like the presentation almost as much as I like the item itself.
Can't wait to see the "branch"... Go to Comment
Boots of the Asrok
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kamina's comment on 2006-12-12 11:44 PM
I find the style of the submission very appealing and entertaining. The boots themselves are well thought out and very usable.

I also think Tarak would make a great NPC sub. I can quite easily see him as an interesting encounter or even a plot hook. Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-08 04:52 PM
I so like simple items with manifold applications. Logical and pretty! Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-11 01:04 PM
Thanks you did it! Have forgotten this one. Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-09 09:32 AM
Good Solid Basic Magic Item. I added it to the generic magic item listing. Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-11 12:59 PM
Ah the things that could be done with this one. First and formost as a leash for the dog, one so apt at wrapping leashes around legs, trees, and the like.

Bravo Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-08 03:55 PM
Useful for tying someone to a post in sight of everyone. Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-08 07:28 PM
Quite nicely done. A simple, yet useful, magical item. Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-09 12:18 PM
Reminds me a bit of the whole "severing the Astral cord" thing. Wonderful item val! Go to Comment
Spirit Cord
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-11 01:06 PM
That's an awesome idea! Go to Comment
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