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The Scratching Stone
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-21 08:33 PM
Can't believe I had misspelled 'slab'.... Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-18 01:38 PM
Well done, and it's quite a sight to see this magic in action. Also comes with much juicy detail. I like 'Cardos the Just'... well like is maybe not the right word.

A fine character by all accounts. Crippled but not helpless, injured by the world, but enough living to execute a little poetic justice. Great work! Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-20 12:27 PM
An interesting character with a good history and better hooks.

Now people might begin to look for him, questing for his power. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Maggot's comment on 2006-12-19 08:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-18 12:04 PM
Good and engaging story, character is believable and adds another side to the grimy and desperate beggar. Well done val. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-18 12:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-19 06:19 PM
Oh, he will do quite nicely!

I'll steal a line from Strolen. The Entwiners and Herithi get my mind spinning with ideas! Nice work. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-18 11:22 AM
Will be converting some of the notables in this sub to Stubs and then Subs as time allows.

In some ways it's like making an onion - you always need to add another layer :)

I will be elaborating on the home city, its politics and culture as time allows, but for now it is a large, middle-easternlike maritime city. There are two major ethinic division with the minority in power. Herithi is part of the majority which is oppressed, Cardos (and all other government figures) are part of the minority.

Note to self: Who makes an onion?? Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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valadaar's comment on 2012-05-15 06:16 PM
Thanks - he's up with Tohm Bones as my own favorites !

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Herithi the Beggar
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-12-18 11:24 AM
A very original NPC! It seems that the beggars and lowlifes of the city have more magical resources than one might expect!

I like the way that his history was presented and the nicely fleshed-out supporting characters, the cruel judge and the regretful executioner.

I suspect that Yatharith would have kept a regular watch on the activity of the courts, both to recruit likely future beggars from among the executioner's maimed victims and to gather information that might interest his friends among the criminal underworld. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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the Wanderer's comment on 2006-12-18 07:26 PM
Not only an amusing and somehow likable character, but I'll agree as above....a wonderful way to see the "Entwiners" in action!

I'm liking the school even more now! Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-05-04 07:43 PM


A fascinating NPC, and one that coudl easily prompt the more good hearted adventures to take it upon themsevles to either heal or avenege, especially once they realize the mans capability and how his gratitude could be reapaid...


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Herithi the Beggar
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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-15 01:15 PM
Hmm, I'm not sure about avenging him. As he pretty much succeeded in silencing his oppressors.

However healing him would in my mind doubtless grant the PC's his eternal gratitude and perhaps some extra special rope(s). Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-15 01:19 PM
There really isn't anything else that I'm able to add to this that hasn't already been mentioned.

Well done valadaar! An inspiring submission to be sure.

I'm currently picturing a campaign set in the Assassin's Creed universe. Using this fellow would definately make for an interesting plot/plot aide.

Many thanks to you valadaar for a great submission - 5/5

Oh, before I forget, have my HoH ;-) Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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MysticMoon's comment on 2011-05-05 07:18 AM


A memorable NPC, to be sure.


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School of Entwiners
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-17 06:55 AM
Funny it is, but very usable at the same time. And hey, this would work nicely with the Hiberian String! It works for me; can I steal it for my system? :)

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You have been questioned in detail, because while the school can work nicely standalone, it has possibly a much deeper magical background. And we do love magical theory. There's quite a few schools of magic around here, but most are only the basic idea.

And MoonHunter is hard on you, as this could easily become a supplement to other systems (D20 even, duh). The idea and much detail is there - it depends on you whether you want to expand it further. We would love to hear more.

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(Low power) Climb - lets the rope crawl upon a surface - say, up or down the mountainside - and hold its own weight there. A further spell may be required to tie it to something. Sight of the spellcaster is very useful. Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-17 07:04 AM
While it is close to Order of the Holy Swine, I think it's even closer to Dwarven Runecasting, where the effect is based on the caster spending time and concentration creating the rune, or the knots in this case. System-wide, doesn't really need to be based on mana, but can be easily adapted. Go to Comment
School of Entwiners
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-18 01:46 PM
A nice bit about the history of the school.

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Reading on the Herithi character, I came to wonder about this: couldn't (some of) the spells also effect hair, and similar natural threads? Even if the caster could cast only upon himself, there would be manifold applications. Speaking of Herithi, making the hair more sensitive to air currents and the like, he could improve his senses, and percieve more of his surroundings. Go to Comment
School of Entwiners
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-19 02:33 AM
Well, it wouldn't remove the blindness, just make him more "Whoa, these people really have their other senses improved." Even a decent bonus would make it seem he only knows his surroundings well. (As for Herithi though, you are right.)

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Now Dwarwes... with all those beards, and many little knots here and there, for purely decorative purposes of course... who knows if they are such great fighters for their physique only. Go to Comment
School of Entwiners
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-21 01:35 PM
Among other Easter customs in my country, there are woven small whips out of young flexible twigs, typically of willows. After the holidays, they are mostly discarded, but I have seen that a few people plant them, and with some care they sprout, growing into weird-looking 'trees', that are made of tightly interwoven thinner beams.


Now the idea: an Entwiner could thus wave together the fresh twigs, and plant them to grow. The actual 'ripening' of the spell would take years, with the growing plant absorbing it's own power of life and growth into itself; growing slower than normal.

To release the spell, the entwiner will untie the knots in the reverse order they were bound. Doing so, they release the power of life the tree has accumulated, in effect casting a potent healing spell on those around it. Its power depends on how long was the tree allowed to grow; but the untieing may be too hard if the tree is left alone for too long - beams growing thicker and harder, eventually growing into one.

Understandably, the spell is rarely used. Go to Comment
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