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Twin Paper
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valadaar's comment on 2007-03-28 07:32 PM
Twin Journal

A pair of books created with large amounts of Twin Paper. Generally used on fleet flagships for communication with High Command, and sometimes on especially important espionage missions. Go to Comment
Twin Paper
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Kassy's comment on 2014-06-25 05:45 AM
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The Scratching Stone
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-21 01:16 PM
I would think that there is a subtle enchantment placed on the stone, that discourages the simple folk from interfering with it. Or maybe they just register on some level, hidden to them, that damaging the stone would be a very bad idea.

Of course, once someone else finds out, and rushes in to break it up into nice little pieces... ouch.

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The scholarly details could recieve more power, if the players find themselves on the opposing side of would-be-miners. What if there is a prophecy, that something unnatural and terrible will happen at the Stone? Unclear as prophecies go, it could be that somebody plans to create a massive stone golem (or few) for some real muscle - and that could be also a real plot.

But there is also the Stone itself - so off with the PCs to hunt for more knowledge about it, and inevitably about the forgotten people of the region. With a few unclean legends of the scourge of their time, or some pictographic burial findings, they should be able to piece the big secret together.

Suitable for groups that like research of this kind, though.

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Oh, and: it's a nice plotlocation. :) Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-21 12:46 AM
Nicely executed and has a lot of scholarly details (I am not sure where anyone dealing with this would get those, but we move on). The piece is generic enough that it has dozens of uses in dozens of ways.

This one could be a modern or supers submissions as well as just a fantasy one.

Gets some paws up. Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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Iain's comment on 2006-12-21 05:05 PM
Excellent Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-21 07:38 AM
Very nice, good historical aspects as well as impending doom for the greedy. Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-20 05:40 PM
I really like this and can imagine the furious Wrym, of a different type then *modern* Dragons, bursting out because of human greed. 5/5 Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-21 07:01 PM
Very nicely done, though it could probably use a bit more in the way of potential plots. I like it, I really do. Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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Murometz's comment on 2008-12-18 08:38 AM
Not sure why I missed this one. VERY good! Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-20 12:24 PM
The Dragon can easily be swapped out for any similar Mystic Scale monster, all one needs to do is change the meaning of the word Haern. If desired, I can add the dragon as a sub, but there are enough suitable dragons out there to fit the bill. Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-21 01:51 PM
The Pictorial idea is great! Since the old culture is mostly stone-age (with experiments with copper and later bronze) cave paintings fit in quite nicely.

The paintings could depict the battle between the Dragon and the Alun gods (monster with big teeth, lots of dead stick-people) and a rough image of the stone. Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-21 08:33 PM
Can't believe I had misspelled 'slab'.... Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
manfred's comment on 2006-12-18 01:38 PM
Well done, and it's quite a sight to see this magic in action. Also comes with much juicy detail. I like 'Cardos the Just'... well like is maybe not the right word.

A fine character by all accounts. Crippled but not helpless, injured by the world, but enough living to execute a little poetic justice. Great work! Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-20 12:27 PM
An interesting character with a good history and better hooks.

Now people might begin to look for him, questing for his power. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2006-12-19 08:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-18 12:04 PM
Good and engaging story, character is believable and adds another side to the grimy and desperate beggar. Well done val. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-18 12:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-19 06:19 PM
Oh, he will do quite nicely!

I'll steal a line from Strolen. The Entwiners and Herithi get my mind spinning with ideas! Nice work. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-18 11:22 AM
Will be converting some of the notables in this sub to Stubs and then Subs as time allows.

In some ways it's like making an onion - you always need to add another layer :)

I will be elaborating on the home city, its politics and culture as time allows, but for now it is a large, middle-easternlike maritime city. There are two major ethinic division with the minority in power. Herithi is part of the majority which is oppressed, Cardos (and all other government figures) are part of the minority.

Note to self: Who makes an onion?? Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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valadaar's comment on 2012-05-15 06:16 PM
Thanks - he's up with Tohm Bones as my own favorites !

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