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The Scratching Stone
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-21 07:38 AM
Very nice, good historical aspects as well as impending doom for the greedy. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-20 05:40 PM
I really like this and can imagine the furious Wrym, of a different type then *modern* Dragons, bursting out because of human greed. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Chaosmark's comment on 2006-12-21 07:01 PM
Very nicely done, though it could probably use a bit more in the way of potential plots. I like it, I really do. Go to Comment
The Scratching Stone
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Murometz's comment on 2008-12-18 08:38 AM
Not sure why I missed this one. VERY good! Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-20 12:24 PM
The Dragon can easily be swapped out for any similar Mystic Scale monster, all one needs to do is change the meaning of the word Haern. If desired, I can add the dragon as a sub, but there are enough suitable dragons out there to fit the bill. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-21 01:51 PM
The Pictorial idea is great! Since the old culture is mostly stone-age (with experiments with copper and later bronze) cave paintings fit in quite nicely.

The paintings could depict the battle between the Dragon and the Alun gods (monster with big teeth, lots of dead stick-people) and a rough image of the stone. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-21 08:33 PM
Can't believe I had misspelled 'slab'.... Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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manfred's comment on 2006-12-18 01:38 PM
Well done, and it's quite a sight to see this magic in action. Also comes with much juicy detail. I like 'Cardos the Just'... well like is maybe not the right word.

A fine character by all accounts. Crippled but not helpless, injured by the world, but enough living to execute a little poetic justice. Great work! Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-12-20 12:27 PM
An interesting character with a good history and better hooks.

Now people might begin to look for him, questing for his power. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Maggot's comment on 2006-12-19 08:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-12-18 12:04 PM
Good and engaging story, character is believable and adds another side to the grimy and desperate beggar. Well done val. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-12-18 12:13 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-12-19 06:19 PM
Oh, he will do quite nicely!

I'll steal a line from Strolen. The Entwiners and Herithi get my mind spinning with ideas! Nice work. Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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valadaar's comment on 2006-12-18 11:22 AM
Will be converting some of the notables in this sub to Stubs and then Subs as time allows.

In some ways it's like making an onion - you always need to add another layer :)

I will be elaborating on the home city, its politics and culture as time allows, but for now it is a large, middle-easternlike maritime city. There are two major ethinic division with the minority in power. Herithi is part of the majority which is oppressed, Cardos (and all other government figures) are part of the minority.

Note to self: Who makes an onion?? Go to Comment
Herithi the Beggar
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valadaar's comment on 2012-05-15 06:16 PM
Thanks - he's up with Tohm Bones as my own favorites !

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Herithi the Beggar
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-12-18 11:24 AM
A very original NPC! It seems that the beggars and lowlifes of the city have more magical resources than one might expect!

I like the way that his history was presented and the nicely fleshed-out supporting characters, the cruel judge and the regretful executioner.

I suspect that Yatharith would have kept a regular watch on the activity of the courts, both to recruit likely future beggars from among the executioner's maimed victims and to gather information that might interest his friends among the criminal underworld. Go to Comment
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the Wanderer's comment on 2006-12-18 07:26 PM
Not only an amusing and somehow likable character, but I'll agree as above....a wonderful way to see the "Entwiners" in action!

I'm liking the school even more now! Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-05-04 07:43 PM


A fascinating NPC, and one that coudl easily prompt the more good hearted adventures to take it upon themsevles to either heal or avenege, especially once they realize the mans capability and how his gratitude could be reapaid...


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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-15 01:15 PM
Hmm, I'm not sure about avenging him. As he pretty much succeeded in silencing his oppressors.

However healing him would in my mind doubtless grant the PC's his eternal gratitude and perhaps some extra special rope(s). Go to Comment
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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-15 01:19 PM
There really isn't anything else that I'm able to add to this that hasn't already been mentioned.

Well done valadaar! An inspiring submission to be sure.

I'm currently picturing a campaign set in the Assassin's Creed universe. Using this fellow would definately make for an interesting plot/plot aide.

Many thanks to you valadaar for a great submission - 5/5

Oh, before I forget, have my HoH ;-) Go to Comment
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