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Kineticite
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2007-02-21 10:55 PM
Basically, the problem is this: Because of the basic joys known as Quantum physics and Brownian Motion, there is a fundamental limit to the minimum effective size of a flywheel, never mind the tiny amount of kinetic energy you can stuff into a handful of tungsten atoms. Best case, you dump the heat out at 90% of the rate it comes in at, worst case, you rip it apart even as it charges. There are many ways to execute it, however, but most of them will involve the deformation or linkage of semi-stable molecules. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-02-08 12:29 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Kineticite
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-02-08 01:00 PM
Kineticite
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Chaosmark's comment on 2007-02-07 10:45 PM
Wow. True Sci-fi. Nice job. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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Pariah's comment on 2007-02-09 05:14 PM
Nifty's. Bonus point for the controlled burn section, just like C4. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-03-19 06:06 AM
Nice item, seems dangerous...., could have placed all these facts into a narrative structure but I understand it may have been a challenge just to get all this information covered and communicated effectively. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-21 10:18 AM
What parts of the Sci part bother you? :) Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-22 06:19 AM
Ok. Guess I'll stick to the 'fiction' part :) Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-08 08:50 AM
I have a sub/story/? in mind that uses the explosive and non-bioactive properties as a key aspect.. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-21 06:55 PM
No, my thoughts on yours was just that it took a long time to charge. I've been starting the math to find out how much energy could be stored by nanotech flywheels using the physics equations, but have'nt really spent the time to sort it all out.

As for the steampunk aspect, I'm not sure - if it can contain enough energy to be explosive, it can be used as high yield fuel as well and drive gas turbines, etc.

This idea was based on accounts of large-scale flywheels used for energy storage, and what happened when the bearings got loose.

The other parts - hacking the system,etc, just struck me as hazards that would have to be delt with, and could add interest. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-25 07:12 AM
Well, I think I have that one covered :)

The cells are organized in such a manner that when packed together the flywheels all will have random orientation. This is necessary for the material not to exibit gyroscopic effects at the macro level. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-02-25 11:16 AM
Since the 'cells' self-destruct by destabilizing the flywheel, wouldn't that allow heat to be generated more suddenly then it was charged? I'm imagining it like a coiled spring. It takes time to charge, but little time to discharge?

As for the issues of the effects of quantum physics and brownian motion, is that just an issue of scale? If there were enough atoms involved in a particular cell, wouldn't some of these issues be mitigated? Go to Comment
Kineticite
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valadaar's comment on 2013-03-19 07:24 AM
Absolutely, but my intent at the time was to use a product magazine style presentation as opposed to a narrative approach. Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-02-23 06:11 PM
OK. So the "nano flywheel" doesn't pan out. The other factors of the technology are just engineering problems:

Slow to charge? As part of the manufacuring process, you send the stuff on a parabolic orbit deep into the local star's gravity well. All the energy you could ever want is down there, you just wait for the material pods to come on back up. As long as you do most of your manufacturing in orbit, so you don't have to fight the planetary gravity well, the energy captured as the material passes close to the sun should be ample. I'd recommend small pods of the stuff that "bloom" when they approach the primary. Sending it out loose would work, but the "stream" would likely be scattered by stellar radiation, making recapture of the material a nuisance. Go to Comment
Kineticite
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Kassy's comment on 2008-07-19 07:21 AM
I dropped the bomb...


...do you have it? Go to Comment
Hachnar Velstrad
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Cheka Man's comment on 2007-02-07 11:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Hachnar Velstrad
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-02-07 10:43 AM
A cold-blooded villain that could lurk in the background of a campaign for years without ever coming to center stage (How often do player characters try to track down where the villains get their poison, anyway?)

He's a well-detailed character with a variety of uses. I could picture him having a falling out with one of his contacts in the underworld, leading to a cat-and-mouse game where the villains try to do each other in...

Sir Lothar, the Lord High Mayor has asked that you look into this matter. The deaths of several prominent merchants over such a short period of time may be a coincidence, but we suspect not. All the men were quite mysterious in their business dealings..." Go to Comment
Hachnar Velstrad
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the Wanderer's comment on 2007-02-06 08:57 PM
Nice stand alone NPC, great with the shop! Well done! I like the fact that he can play two roles, makes him even more fun and useful. Go to Comment
The Crystal Retort
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manfred's comment on 2007-02-07 02:20 AM
What he said. :)

But I can vote on this solid submission, so here you go. Oh, and I have this feeling that there should be some connection between the two parts... something minor and hard to use, but still... somehow the complete separation doesn't feel right to me. (And psst: check the links to other subs, particularly to the wares.)


Great submission, just the right amount of detail on the characters and the happenings here. I like it. Go to Comment
The Crystal Retort
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Murometz's comment on 2007-02-06 10:39 PM
Not only is this a sample of val's fine work (like a glass cutout of an ant farm in action) but the Iron Spike golem is here. How can you go wrong!

I like the way you neatly packaged tangential and related ideas in this scrodex (did you coin that term yet?). Good stuff, val!

Wont let me vote for some reason, but it will let me HoH!

The man loves his alchemy! Go to Comment
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