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Lightning Steel & Sundries
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2015-06-07 06:30 PM
I would say that they may attract lightning as a side effect of the power they hold. Even heat lightning would be drawn to it. During any normal rain, the odds of getting struck by lightning are greatly increased. If in a thunderstorm, you can pretty much guarantee they will get struck.

The affect would be much like a discharge when getting struck. The wielder is totally unaffected except for the flash but those around them could get hit by the random balls of lightning and have to deal with the concussion.
During a fight, this would be an awesome sight.

If you are trying to sneak up on somebody or are on the run, well, it is basically a beacon to where you are.

All said, during the raining season, you would be a very lonely traveler as I wouldn't go anywhere near you. Go to Comment
Lightning Steel & Sundries
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Nobody's comment on 2014-07-22 07:02 PM
I like the idea of having to catch lightning. Thats pretty cool. I would really like to see more of the ecology of this steel. Does it exist naturally, if it does: what is it like there? Are there any myths or rumors about it, or famous people who used it to do something great (even if untrue)? What is some cool local folklore about it? Is it hard to mine or purify, and what special precautions have to be taken by what group of people. Does it affect local trade anywhere. Can it be used in any alchemical process. Frankensteins monster?

Little bits of detail like that really take a solid idea, and make it a must have idea.

-Nobody Go to Comment
Lightning Steel & Sundries
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-07-22 09:49 PM
So this is what magic swords are made of. :) 5/5 Go to Comment
Lightning Steel & Sundries
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-18 04:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Pieh's comment on 2014-07-09 04:49 PM
A decent submission. It certainly inspires dreams of a seafaring campaign and, like mentioned, could work well with some of Cheka's content.

I love crab people. A shipwreck flotilla home for them made by a magical whale is so much fun. Thank you. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2014-11-02 03:47 AM
What Cheka said. They would fit well into any aquatic setting and would do an excellent job of adding to the general myths surrounding the sea. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-06-30 09:49 PM
The evil shark people link is broken, but I like this idea, but I just happen to like the idea of whales as being more powerful and a threat to humanity, rather than it's victim. I can see the black leviathans coexisting in varying states of peace and war with things like Cheka's krakens.

Nicely done. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-30 10:23 PM
They would fit well in the Acqua setting. Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-30 10:24 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-30 02:43 PM
Update: Out with ye - Cult of Done! Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-06-30 10:15 PM
Its not broke - it was a filler link that didn't get filled..

Guess I'll need to fix it :)
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The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
valadaar's comment on 2014-07-09 04:51 PM
Pieh? Wow! :)
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The Black Leviathans
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valadaar's comment on 2015-06-12 09:24 PM


Yes, this could be strengthened with more time spend on the examples - I meant them to not be cookie cutter creatures, but as individual as humanity in their natures. Also time and energy for the old Val standard has been lacking.

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The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-01 08:33 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Black Leviathans
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-12 08:36 PM
A very versatile species for an acquatic setting and a good solid submission. I personally feel that this sub seems to lack somewhat in the exploration of the character of such a lifeform but then I did note that you said that they are supposed to be a diverse race and you were probably writing this up for game use rather than meta-game description. I guess I'm just measuring this sub. against the normal Val standard. Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
Locations  (Fortification)   (Other)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-06-02 11:45 AM
Maybe the king is a recent one rather then one long past? Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2014-06-02 09:57 PM
It is simple and to the point. The information is given sparsely to tune it to ones own group or campaign with ease. I rather like it. I found myself thinking of Hellgate and how this is almost a like minded prison/ forgotten realm of similar torture. I wished for more information but realized it was very bare bones and didn't really need much more regarding information I couldn't fill out myself.

I like it val. Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
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valadaar's comment on 2014-05-30 01:00 PM
cult of done. Begone.

Will fix the ? in the title tonight. Why did it do that?
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The Falling Castle
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-31 05:38 AM
4.0/5

What I would like to know is in what way will the deep madness and evil of the place affect the PC's?

A good sub with lots of dark potential. Well done val. I'll wait patiently for an audience with the King. Go to Comment
The Falling Castle
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-31 05:38 AM
Devil's Advocate

There might not be many people that enjoy playing an evil character, but say the party is evil. There's plenty of fun for them here. Especially with Sir Hindril. Go to Comment
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