This is a nice idea. While it needs some editing around the edges for grammer mistakes it smacks of a decent idea.
It sounds like a decent idea of good turned bad but for a good reason. More description of his items would be nice as well. His cloak being very mundane and not exciting to say the least, but his armband has sounding promise. If you don't flesh it out someone here might and link it back. As a matter of fact, I think I will try my hand at it. Go to Comment