This is a nice idea. While it needs some editing around the edges for grammer mistakes it smacks of a decent idea.
It sounds like a decent idea of good turned bad but for a good reason. More description of his items would be nice as well. His cloak being very mundane and not exciting to say the least, but his armband has sounding promise. If you don't flesh it out someone here might and link it back. As a matter of fact, I think I will try my hand at it. Go to Comment
A solid NPC, his tactics reminds me of how the Communists operate before they come into power in China but then that's cos I'm addicted to watching mainland Chinse spy thriller dramas lately :) Go to Comment
The king's palace is destroyed by a falling star, which detonates like a nuclear bomb in the center of the city. When the inhabitants grow brave enough to investigate the ruins of the palace, they find a new ruler, one from beyond the stars, emerging from the meteor.