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Gore hook
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
valadaar's comment on 2010-02-03 10:52 AM
There is a germ of an interesting item here, but the execution needs a lot of work. Read it aloud - the run-on sentences should stand out as well as other issues.

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Gore hook
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Grey's comment on 2009-01-13 12:37 PM
A couple of things with this one. First, the grammar. Mostly run on sentences, easily fixed. The item itself though, I'm having a hard time thinking that big enough chunks of gore would stick to the blade to do much other than writhe around and look menacing. Beyond that, a decent take on the evil sword concept. Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
manfred's comment on 2009-01-13 05:52 PM
Welcome to the club then! :) Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2009-01-13 11:13 PM
This is a novel idea, but it would be a very hard sell for a serious gaming group. Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-13 01:13 PM
Here come the bunnies of doom! Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-15 10:27 PM
please finish the left ear for the sake of my ocd. Thanks! Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-15 07:20 PM
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(")_(") Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Grey's comment on 2009-01-13 08:07 PM
Reminds me of an odd book I saw at a little bookshop once- 'The Big Book of Bunny Suicides'. Very funny, you might like it. Go to Comment
The Sketch Pad of Magic Bunnies
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
nightmareshadow's comment on 2009-01-13 04:28 AM
Okay i am starting to feel like the silly item inventer here. Go to Comment
Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2009-01-25 02:59 PM
BUMP. This one is growing on me. :)
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Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Pieh's comment on 2009-01-11 06:21 PM
A nice spoof of the classic Eyes of Petfrification. I was about to ask about the "Why?" of the petrification, but I can assume it's because it's a spoof. I am amused. Go to Comment
Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-12 10:21 AM
Both gruesome and comical. I guess that fact that Anima has to rely on them for his sole source of conversation, speaks volumes about his lack of a proper social life. I want to know why they have been enchanted to petrify the people they bump into. Are they intended as guardians who protect the mage's stuff from would-be thieves? Go to Comment
Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Scrasamax's comment on 2009-01-11 05:15 PM
Delightfully and comically bizarre item, very puny. Go to Comment
Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-11 03:57 PM
How grumpy are the eyes? Go to Comment
Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-11-06 05:14 AM


Very amusing!


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Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Murometz's comment on 2009-01-11 07:16 PM
quirky and endearing item! Can't help but smile, especially at the chattering away part and their name.

I think it makes for a memorable addition to a game. I can picture a thief, crouched down low, at the back of a dead-end alley, slowly opening the pouch, having just stolen it minutes ago, and many streets away. His eyes sparkle with greed, anxious to see what "treasure" he has acquired. As he opens the strings of the pouch and peers inside, his grin gives way to a sudden look of dismay and revulsion.

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Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
valadaar's comment on 2009-01-12 10:44 AM
By hit, I assume these are thrown weapons. In any case, this is a neat item and could easily lead to many amusing moments. Go to Comment
Talking Eyeballs of Petrification
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
nightmareshadow's comment on 2009-01-15 03:15 AM
I will go ahead and answer some questions that came up in the comments.
Cheka are the eyes grumpy, not generally but if they have been thrown a lot are given to complaint.
Maggot no they were not really made for his defence except maybe as a last resort, so why did he make them of petrification only he knows for sure.
Valadaar yes they are thrown or dropped weapons though they have a tendency to complain about it. Go to Comment
Anima di Nerezza
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2009-01-12 10:07 AM
Not bad at all, but as Val pointed out, it could do with some proper punctuation. Other than that, this anti-social mage would fit well into the setting of a small but prosperous town. Go to Comment
Anima di Nerezza
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-11 09:41 AM
Not all wizards need to be bad all the time. Go to Comment
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