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Emotion 17
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
manfred's comment on 2009-01-26 07:02 PM
Yes, that was actually intended that way, the "you know what I'm talkin' about" assumption. Is it too confusing? Go to Comment
Emotion 17
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
manfred's comment on 2009-01-27 05:15 PM
That does it - out with ya! :) Go to Comment
Emotion 17
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
manfred's comment on 2009-01-27 06:27 PM
The chippers are not really 'evil', they just want to bring happiness to everyone. That makes them scarier.

And they are not exactly a cult - while cooperating eagerly, they somehow failed to create all the necessary trappings, literature, philosophy, or organize around a leader. But yes, someone could definitely use the Emotion to such a purpose. Go to Comment
Emotion 17
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-04-02 11:37 AM
This is a great science fiction plot. Simple, direct, yet with true story and lots of plot potential. You can drop it into any setting where chipping is possible. Go to Comment
Emotion 17
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-27 06:02 PM
Imagines an evil cult of this kind. Go to Comment
Emotion 17
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Chaosmark's comment on 2009-01-27 05:18 PM
You know, that last bit you added about the factory making thousands of chips really added what I thought was missing to the ending. I think the sub really flows together now. Good job manfred! Go to Comment
Emotion 17
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-26 05:23 PM
more comments:
1. I like the way you covered the societal progression from Improved Life 3000 to Emotion 17. Nice realistic jumps.
2. I have to say it is slightly confusing at first, not so much because it is "technical", but it seems written in a very "for those who know how this stuff works" kind of way. Nothing wrong with that, just confusing to figure out the "gist" of the sub is, until i got to, "So what is Emotion 17"?

more to come. :) Go to Comment
Emotion 17
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-26 12:13 AM
I think this is excellent, but need to read it once more on the morrow before commenting further. Go to Comment
Emotion 17
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Murometz's comment on 2009-01-27 11:35 AM
not, not at all! Its a great read. And nice ending too.

Also, you made me have dreams last night of rampaging parapalegic zombies, strung-out on Emo-17 :) Go to Comment
Emotion 17
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valadaar's comment on 2009-01-29 07:33 PM
This has the seed of a true sci fi short story or larger Manfred. This is really unique thinking! Go to Comment
Emotion 17
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
dark_dragon's comment on 2009-10-23 12:08 PM
prozac anyone? Go to Comment
Emotion 17
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Nafar's comment on 2010-04-23 12:03 PM
wow. this is good and freaky Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Strolen's comment on 2014-02-09 11:59 AM
A series of rough pictures of herbs and poorly scribbled directions on how to prepare them. Everything is accurate but hard to read and very rudimentary. It will turn out that it is one of the first volumes written by a master druid or mage when they were only 7 years old. Among collectors, it is almost priceless. If returned to the owner, it would amuse him to see it again to the point where he we would bestow great favors. Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
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Strolen's comment on 2014-02-09 12:00 PM
Popped in from Mourn's HoH. Books are very underused! Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
manfred's comment on 2009-01-27 05:24 PM
I think as well some of these deserve expansion; at the same time, the 'roleplaying' components should be kept separate from the content, to make it easier to slap them on other books. 'Cause hey, we've got tons of other books already! (And I'm too lazy to create more.)

So these are more 'modifiers' of existing books than books themselves. Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
manfred's comment on 2009-01-28 03:35 PM
That hurt. Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
manfred's comment on 2014-02-09 12:54 PM
Quite a few books carry the symbol of Elben, a bookbinder of some repute. Not only are the bindings ornate, they usually contain some non-traditional features:

- with built-in springs and wires, the books are surprisingly hard to open and keep open. Reading such a book is a serious chore, unless you have someone to help out. The first such book was about athletic exercises and Elben repeated the joke on several occasions.
- the massive book is locked, the key very likely lost. The problem is, picking the lock can easily trigger a small mechanical explosion, that will release the binding and spread the pages all over the place. Now you have to put them together.
- this particularly decorated tome contains several cleverly hidden weapons and sharp objects. Some may be still poisoned...
- by sliding and rotating parts on the cover, you can solve the trivial puzzles that will let you access various parts of the book. A few sages and book-lovers speculate that one obscure combination will also let you see a few hidden pages. Many others claim it's nonsense. They all would like to prove their theory. Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2009-01-28 09:30 AM
You find a book

Is it a spell book?

No

Pass Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Scrasamax's comment on 2014-02-10 08:51 AM
Neat idea. Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-26 08:40 PM
Now these are interesting books. Go to Comment
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