Val is right, would be an excellent way to kick of 101 alien races. The story itself was nicely done, interesting and thought provoking. After reading it I wanted to create a few alien races, well done Manfred, loved many details like the chirping:D
Great read, manfred! Very entertaining "average joe" POV. Good voice on this one. And it does get the creative juices flowing as Sil mentioned.
Liked the message too. Too damn big (universe), too damn many (of them). Well done.
I like this one, and it feels like it could be a good star post for a 101 alien race codex :)
A nice galactic introduction, and provides a good backdrop of first contact history without niggling too much over the specific details.
It feels like the prelude to something more, that it stops just shy of the next chapter involving humanities first steps into the stars. (Similar to Star Trek Enterprise?) A creative Gm could easily use this as the spring board for a space faring campaign involving the crew of Earths first FTL capable starship.
Much enjoyed, and gave me lots of ideas, nicely done!
Excellent exposition. This is the kind of sub that gets my mind churning.
I agree with the others, this does feel like a prelude to much more.
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I am a rare person to vote so high but when a sub grips me, it grips me. I want to read the book NOW. Go to Comment