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The Language Archeoc
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-14 12:11 PM
Wow, the "King of Stubs". What a fascinating subject. The tale of a language...

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The Language Archeoc
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
mimic12455's comment on 2011-12-20 12:38 PM


Certainly a good, solid stub. I am interested to see more in the future.


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Alucardian Psionovariates
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Cheka Man's comment on 2011-10-20 10:36 AM


5/5, for your orginal take on vampires.


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Alucardian Psionovariates
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
valadaar's comment on 2013-11-18 10:47 AM
I am torn on pseudo-scientific takes on Vampirism. The attempt to describe many of the 'Vampiric' attributes through science always strikes me as forced, though this is a very good attempt. It brings me to mind of the Necromunders from Chronicles of Reddik.



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Alucardian Psionovariates
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-13 09:03 PM
A fairly original concept, to interpret vampires in terms of psionics. Write up is also solid. One nitpick with it, however, is that halfway thru the "What is a Psionovariate?" section (having forgotten the title) I really wondered abt why the exclusive focus on the Alucardian Psionovariates as I was expeceting a brief description of each Psionovariate type. Maybe change the section heading or regroup content in the opening paragraph and the What is a Psionovariate section (I mean, currently it just seems a bit confusing to me because the starting paragraphs talk abt Alucardian Psionovariates specifically. Then the "What is a...?" section starts from a general overview on the Psionvariates and then w/o warning it goes back to focusing specifically on the Alucardians.) Go to Comment
Alucardian Psionovariates
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
hylandpad's comment on 2011-10-20 03:58 PM
Update: Added some information about Matthias Hellenbrecht Go to Comment
Gatling Cannon
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2011-10-17 12:04 PM


Nicely done.


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Gatling Cannon
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Cheka Man's comment on 2011-10-17 05:43 PM


Very impressive.


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Gatling Cannon
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-19 12:18 PM
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Gatling Cannon
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
sverigesson's comment on 2012-02-11 09:27 AM
As a fan and sometime scholar of the history of guns and firearms, this makes for a convincing history of a cannon that, while never actually having been invented, very well could have been in an alternate history. I love this. Go to Comment
Carapace Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Cheka Man's comment on 2011-10-12 08:15 PM


Very useful.


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Carapace Armor
Items  (Armor)   (Combat)
Dozus's comment on 2012-11-01 02:36 PM
I think I expected this to be made from an actual carapace. From reading the sub, I gather it's supposed to be nonmechanized armor in an era of mechanized armors? That makes it kind of neat, and the details work well. Go to Comment
The World Forge
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
Strolen's comment on 2012-05-13 09:47 AM
Deep. Better than on the back of a turtle, that is for sure! Go to Comment
The World Forge
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
Scrasamax's comment on 2011-10-07 11:00 AM


Visually impressive. Very cosmically aware


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The World Forge
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
Cheka Man's comment on 2011-10-05 10:45 AM


New and orginal. 5/5


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The World Forge
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
Dozus's comment on 2013-02-22 01:37 PM
Haven't seen a creation story/plane quite like this. Great atmosphere. Go to Comment
The World Forge
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Other)
valadaar's comment on 2013-05-13 11:42 AM
This one has an interesting take on world creation :)
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The Unhinged Prince
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
Scrasamax's comment on 2011-09-26 11:37 PM


Only Voted


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The Unhinged Prince
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
EchoMirage's comment on 2011-09-26 09:08 AM


This is a very cinematic version of schizophrenia, and far more coherent and... constructive... than the usual thing. Also, more benevolent by a large margin.



Thus, you might consider avoid calling it such.



Alas, the writing is rather charming, and the character very useable in a game.



My thoughts? Call it simply madness, not by a diagnosis which it does not fit.


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The Unhinged Prince
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Political)
EchoMirage's comment on 2011-09-26 09:34 AM
Schizophrenia does present with audiovisual hallucinations and a disconnection from reality, coupled with seeing patterns, messages and causality where there is none and inappropriate emotional response (these are the so-called plus-symptoms; the minus-symptoms are emotional shallowness, coma, reduced drive, etc.)

The "benevolence" comment was in connection with the clinical presentation of his ailment, not his benevolence.

Perchance, very much like real patients, his visions may become much more frequent and severe under duress - at peace, he is quite sane, but stressed, he's way 'out there.' Go to Comment
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