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Tarsir Celebalda
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ephemeralstability's comment on 2003-05-31 04:57 AM
Good idea! A deep character who's suffered great loss. Very thorough too! Only one real query: does he have any aims or goals? Someone who'd been through all that would, I'd imagine, desire revenge (although Morgoth is now dead) or would want to cure Orc-kind from their dreadful affliction.

Just a quick question: is a habbit anything like a hobbit? Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2003-06-16 05:50 AM
Wonderful.

There is a great difference between him and any other Orc: his speech must sound very archaic. Even if he knows the newer languages, what he says will be influenced from all the things he lived through. Noble at first, and for ages far from people to speak to. I suspect any Orc that speaks the High-Elven Quenya fluently would have a mighty shocking impact. :)

What about Orcs, the other Orcs? Of course he tries to evade them, as it makes the pain more present. But that is not always possible, and he might be at least occasionally spotted from afar. Do they have legends about this mysterious figure? He is something like the grandfather of all Orcs... my guess would be that Orcs would respect him and feel unsure around him. Could this be in some way exploitable? He might make a good diplomat for negotiating with Orcs. Could be peace possible? Go to Comment
Tarsir Celebalda
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-31 11:20 AM
You really like Lord of the Rings, don't you? Almatari would probably enjoy meeting you. Those're some good books, I tell you. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-06-11 01:31 PM
Who's Isaac? Go to Comment
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hopfrog16's comment on 2003-06-01 03:08 PM
This character isn't violent or isn't an angry type at all... infact if anything this whole experience has made him opposite the way he was... He used to be Arogaunt and very opinionated. He used to get politically involved in alot of things and made issues his business... even if they weren't. All he wants now is to live in peace and quiet. He has seen more then enough death and destruction. If you need his help however, his generosity overcomes him and he will usually help you... don't expect him to start attacking people if you are under attack though. As for the LOTR thing I've been playing MERP lately... I'll make some other fantasy chars too later on. =)

(Whoops, spelled it wrong. Guess I'm not some super human grammar spelling Saiyan thingy after all... I hope this means I can still leap tall buildings in a single bound though =P) Go to Comment
Tarsir Celebalda
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hopfrog16's comment on 2003-06-15 02:49 AM
Thanks Strolen. =) Glad to see my newbie works are appreciated. =) (he is me) ;) Go to Comment
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hopfrog16's comment on 2003-06-16 01:16 PM
That's true manfred. =) Who knows what all has happened to him in his lifetime. One thing you must relise, however, is that Orcs are raised to hate and despise, they aren't born that way. Although, in the fourth age, there are some good Orcs. Most are still evil, however, and wouldn't be very diplomatic. This is free material, though... Use it how you see fit. =) Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-11-08 02:43 AM
How in the world did this submission garner such a high score being derived from Tolkien's work without being utterly ripped on for using so much of Tolkien's work? Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-01-14 10:21 PM
An elf polymorphed into orc shape, a dreadful fate for him. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-11-08 07:05 AM
Why is it bad to use an existing setting aside from ones own for a character?

If this character was just a modification of an existing Tolkien character then I would be with you Scras. The character is a little limited having its backstory so tied to a specific campaign world.

So much fantasy is drawn from his works - this one is just a lot more direct then others. The real value of this character is the absolute disconnect between the typical orc and his actual nature. Go to Comment
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Kassy's comment on 2013-03-06 06:15 AM
3.5/5

A good effort here. Daily Highlight was a good idea Strolen.

Reminds me a lot of LoTR, with the Orcs being descended from Elves. Go to Comment
Ansgar Haakon
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Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-06-01 05:43 PM
Great job yet again^_^.Love the whole background and such :D.You get anymore Characters in,be sure to tell me so I can read 'em. Go to Comment
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-30 04:18 PM
That's a pretty good one.

The Lord of the Rings references and all that can be worked around. Go to Comment
Ansgar Haakon
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-05-30 11:09 PM
Oh, no problem, man.
We welcome it. Go to Comment
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hopfrog16's comment on 2003-05-30 07:40 PM
Thanks. I thought at first this was a description I was supposed to make for my own character (Me being as new as I am to this thing). If you want to use any of my characters for your scenerios though I don't really care. =) Have fun. Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-01-18 06:36 PM
Heh. The Citadel has changed. Not sure whether it would have received that well a reception nowadays :) Go to Comment
Ansgar Haakon
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-01-19 01:16 AM
It is MERP/Rolemaster. +15 = +3 in DnD, but in MERP the bonuses can and do get as high as +110.

Of course only Sauron has those kind of weapons ;) Go to Comment
Ansgar Haakon
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-01-19 12:11 AM
It's a decent character.

A +15 lance given to him by a close friend... (snip) ...and a small bag containing everything he needs.

I assume that +15 isn't a D and D statistic! That would be a CLOSE friend, indeed!

Where can I get ahold of one of those bags? Go to Comment
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