This has undergone a lot of changes for the better. I liked it to begin with, but it has been improved beyond what I expected. So I'll bump my vote up. Good work, keep at it, and I hope you stick around and submit more. Welcome to The Citadel, herrozerro.
Great location! I have a weakness for portals and this is good application of one.
Though, what is preventing a targeted kingdom from putting a wall around the destination point - even it if it covering many square miles, or diverting a river to flood it?
I know if I had such a location in my kingdom I couldn't controll I would. Anyone teleporting in without prior communication would be sprouting many arrows, or drowning.
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