A knoght of the dragon god zandragaal ,memeber of the dragonwright.

sorry i mean knight of the dragon god zandragaal and member of the dragonwright. Go to Comment

In the interest of helping a newer member, I'm going to post and vote upon this. Hopefully my advice will be taken to heart.

1) Run the post through a spell checker. Yes, it takes an extra 30 seconds, however, it can make a post that much more readable.

2) Work on your grammar. Some of the tenses are mixed and jumbled, and that alone will take a full point off your rating.

3) While I think that he has potential as a character, at the moment he just seems...Lifeless. He's there, he has the big bad weapon, and he has the special abilities. What he doesn't really seem to have is anything more than a superficial background. What, for example, are the Lost Treasures of the Dragonwright? What is the Church of the Black Rose? What the heck is the Dragonwright anyway? These are things that you might know, but we have no clue who or what they are. Explain explain explain. Go to Comment

Another example of what NOT to post.... Go to Comment

Ithinck its verry usable for D&D.thankyou verry much!!!! Tallen Go to Comment

You'd be wrong... Go to Comment

Yeah, but they didn't do a very good job of it- sorry, Forgotten. :) Go to Comment

Wow, finally someone else who plays palladium fantasy! Go to Comment

Wow, I read this cause it had the word dwarf in it....well if it was easy it wouldn't be a quest. Go to Comment

I sense a young and enthusiastic roleplayer. You need to take a look at other, highly rated subs to see what gets good ratings here.

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