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Quill of Fine Writing
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-26 10:20 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-07-31 10:22 AM
First person definitely. Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-08-19 08:38 PM
Dont care this one was most unhelpful. Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-11-10 06:32 PM
I like the air of wispfulness you created. I gives a wise DM or player a way of determining who the character will act.

But I would have liked a little 3rd person background.

Again I am beginning to see your name as mark of quality.

Tim C. Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
ephemeralstability's comment on 2003-03-11 11:48 AM
Thought I'd give the 1st person method a go like in Crow's last post. Do you prefer this or a 3rd person approach? Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-07-31 06:02 PM
I prefer 3rd person. Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
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Cheka Man's comment on 2014-03-04 07:40 PM
This is the seed of a great idea. Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
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axlerowes's comment on 2014-03-04 07:42 PM
twas a different time,

what cheka said Go to Comment
Alexir the Melancholic
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valadaar's comment on 2014-03-04 05:26 PM
1st person is interesting, but oh so brief. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
ephemeralstability's comment on 2003-03-11 10:19 AM
Some questions left unanswered:

Why now? Why didn't the spirits awake earlier?
What will they find? Lots of undead?
What happened to the boiling oil? (Actually that all seeped away into the ground of the catacombs)
History: why was the King persecuting the Lamezzites? Why did the priests have sympathy for them?

I thought there I'd written too much already, so these are just left as open questions. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
manfred's comment on 2003-03-12 02:38 AM
Or perhaps, some other group, historically in some way linked to these Lamezzites, is persecuted right now?

Could well awaken these spirits, even if they were sleeping for such a long time. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Agar's comment on 2003-03-12 02:46 PM
Invariably, in any persecution/genocide, some escape. Could this small band of decendants be the ones motavating the excavations or even the purpetraitors?

The Lamezzites likely had thier own beliefs and had at least one spiritual leader with them, perhaps they beseeched thier gods as they were being slaughtered and now are acting to avenge thier murder. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
strom's comment on 2003-03-11 06:35 PM
Perhaps, as the King and his henchmen prepared the oil, a shaman from within the catacombs was casting an incantation of resurrection. This could entail the dead coming back in corporal form and possess the current King, Cardinal, and other political, spiritual, and military leaders.

History: Maybe the Lamezzites are a scape-goat for failures of the King. Historically speaking, there have been many ethnical cultural, and economical reasons given to execute the Jews, Gypsies, Poles, and Irish; to name a few. Thus, the king could merely be averting attention from his own failures in policy driven decrees. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
strom's comment on 2003-03-11 06:43 PM
I forgot to mention that Lamezzites could only come back to life when the crypt was reopened. This would spur fear amongst the current regime, and temptation from a younger, more disbelieving generation. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Magus's comment on 2004-01-22 01:56 PM
I think that you did a great job here, and your not hurting anyone by typing a lot your only helping further, and if people do not want to read all of it, they don't have to. Anyway, catacombs are always a nice dungeon to have. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
gottgen's comment on 2004-01-22 02:47 AM
Can I just say to ephemeralstability, next time you think you're typing too long...don't worry about it!

You do an excelent job in thinking these things up, and any added flavor you can think of is probably worth our reading. Go to Comment
Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2013-08-28 10:33 AM
Not bad - though the scale speaks more of legend than reality. Paying for enough oil to flood the catacombs would probably wreck his economy for years, if it was even possible to source enough oil for the task. And don't get me started on getting it boiling in the first place :)

Perhaps a fair number were slain with boiling oil, and that over the years the legend grew to the scale of 'the entire catacombs' were flooded.


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Catacombs
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2013-09-01 08:23 AM
Simple, straightforward, and a good seed that could be taken in many different directions. Go to Comment
Tact
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Cheka Man's comment on 2008-06-17 12:08 PM
I like it too. Go to Comment
Tact
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-09 09:07 AM
This is the beginning of a nice idea. I would be more apt to put a better vote on it should it be longer and more detailed.

Why is the King of Addarron wanting to bring peace to the region after all this instability? What has changed? What other issues are the region having? What would the son gain if he was the reason behind his fathers death?

Its always a great idea to have players accused of a crime they didn't commit. Especially if at least one of them is of the mind of running first to prove their innocence. Go to Comment
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