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Ranfral
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
elfkin's comment on 2003-11-04 12:40 PM
Thank you miss Hawk, the peasant is named Joseph. A corrupted soul aidding the orcish king to get the staff first. In his mind the death of the king means thhat the land will be weakened. When the black king Vlame(Orcish king) attacks the country of Conqaz, Joseph wil be granted kingship and the love of Ranfral as his prize. Go to Comment
Ranfral
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
elfkin's comment on 2003-11-06 04:02 PM
Poison of their own make, kind of like our equivilent of aids threw a dagger, though it will do more than defeat the immunitary system. Go to Comment
Ranfral
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Natural)
Maggot's comment on 2004-07-25 11:26 PM
Maybe the poison used was of a mystical kind, that no healer could get rid off Go to Comment
Halëfas
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2005-11-08 05:16 PM
This is just equal parts sickly Lord of the Rings and cartoonish Warcraft. There's little detail, and we know almost nothing about their actual culture, just about a couple names and some armed forces. Unworthy.

2.0 Go to Comment
Halëfas
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Scrasamax's comment on 2008-05-05 08:52 AM
Ditto what CP said, generic militant elves.

On the other hand I do like posts like this for what they can be dissected for.

1. The trees were enchanted to produce white light day and night by Lord Valanair - Who was this Lord, is he still around, why did he magic the trees to glow? We already have a potential NPC, and an odd lifeform - the glowing trees.

2. The Flute of Vaxtar - what is it, what can it do, etc etc etc

3. Ellivanor, Meltifiace and Quelfinare - Three cities, three locations. Why is Ellivanor the largest? Are there any rivalries? What are the cities known for, if anything.

4. There is an army of seasoned elvish warriors supported by 240 rangers - Seasoned armies have seen combat and survived if not prevailed. Who have they fought, who are their enemies, what were their losses?

Unofortunelty I must give this submission a 1.5/5, other than spawning some interesting questions, it is still generic, vague, and alltogether too short. Go to Comment
Halëfas
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-10 08:29 AM
What CP said.

2.0/5 Go to Comment
Flute of Vaxtar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Heroic)
Agar's comment on 2003-11-05 01:36 AM
A good item, especially for bards.

What is the "falueth" song? What does that mean, and what does that do? Also, do you have some examples or tales of the tests of Vaxtar? Go to Comment
Flute of Vaxtar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Heroic)
Pieh's comment on 2003-11-05 09:33 PM
Yes it is a very good idea for an item.

And yes i would also like to know of the Falueth Song and of Vaxtar's Trials and maybe even inform us of how one goes about creating songs that work for the flute. Go to Comment
Flute of Vaxtar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Heroic)
elfkin's comment on 2003-11-06 04:16 PM
The falueth song is the song Vaxtar plays when others are weak. The melody strenghens the heart of the good and weakens that of evil. Vaxtars trails are, find out the name of Hathil' father and succesfully raid the dwarvish realm of Faz-Gnomedrax. Go to Comment
Flute of Vaxtar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Heroic)
Zylithan's comment on 2005-11-29 07:52 PM
I really like the idea here, but the post seems like it was written up in a hurry. If you come back and put a little more love into it, I'm sure you could make the goodness shine out even more. Go to Comment
Flute of Vaxtar
Items  (Art and Music)   (Heroic)
zebbin's comment on 2006-02-18 03:49 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Hathil
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
manfred's comment on 2007-08-23 05:44 AM
Cleaning up the post of stray special characters, I'm afraid it is not very remarkable. Perhaps someone will find usefulness in it. Go to Comment
Hathil
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-10-23 06:13 PM
....And?

I don't find anything particularly special about it, but it is well written. Try more detail with your next character, yeah? Go to Comment
Hathil
NPCs  (Major)   (Natural)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-07-01 11:38 AM
How did this become a 4 out of 5? I rated it a 2! Go to Comment
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