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Sao's scissors
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Murometz's comment on 2006-04-01 04:27 PM
A touching tale! And what ephemeralstability said. Go to Comment
Sao's scissors
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Murometz's comment on 2008-02-28 08:10 PM
BUMP. Hoorah for Sao! Go to Comment
Sao's scissors
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Murometz's comment on 2010-10-05 12:29 AM
Great Bump, Pieh. Love this. Go to Comment
Sao's scissors
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axlerowes's comment on 2010-10-05 08:11 AM
I think everyone says the same thing about this, it is a fine story, that in the right context could be useful or interesting. I guess whether you like it or not depends whether or not you find that context interesting. As it is, I found little novel in this story, although it was a nice read and an easy diversion. Go to Comment
Pentwell's book
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Strolen's comment on 2003-12-05 10:26 PM
This one does have a gem inside it!

Should have posted it to Flesh it Out so we could help strengthen it some and fixed all your spelling to make it a more rounded submission. Great increase in useability though elfkin, great job. Go to Comment
Pentwell's book
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-12-04 01:37 PM
....Huh? Go to Comment
Pentwell's book
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MoonHunter's comment on 2003-12-05 02:55 AM
A bit more text and explanation will fill out this basically really good idea. This one has a great potential. Go to Comment
Pentwell's book
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Pieh's comment on 2003-12-04 05:54 PM
Since when are most Gnomes ugly? Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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manfred's comment on 2007-12-08 05:14 PM
It could use some editing, but the idea is really not bad. It would be even more useful, if, after throwing it, its wielder was still able to see it, and the light it produces. Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2003-12-04 01:40 PM
Chill out, man. Serenity now! Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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Ylorea's comment on 2003-12-04 05:20 AM
hmmm, I would say this item could be borrowed from the ultimate equipment guide.....
There black light is considered to be invisible to people with only normal vision, but excelent for people with darkvision. Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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elfkin's comment on 2003-12-04 12:33 PM
I swear to God that I made it up, and as I aid it is undetectable from all eyes, dark or lightseeing Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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Cheka Man's comment on 2010-09-27 09:54 PM
Something that the drow would use. Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-09-28 01:27 PM
Drow? Where? Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-09-28 01:28 PM
Evocative name, I just love the oldies. The have a certain charm. Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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Murometz's comment on 2007-12-08 04:48 PM
The torch aint bad, but KILL ALL ELVES! Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 10:27 AM
The chalk outline view is interesting, but does not seem to mesh with the idea that the torch is putting off black light that only the bearer can see.

A bit confusing, but the idea of a bearer only torch is good.
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Torch of Black Fire
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Dossta's comment on 2010-09-29 03:37 PM
Definitely in need of some editing for clarity. The item itself is interesting, but not overpowering. Might be great for assassins, if it's not too awkward to hold. A few questions:

1. Does a user have any depth perception while using this?
2. Can the torch be quenched by water, blown out by a strong gust of wind, etc?
3. Is it self-replenishing, or is it consumed like a normal torch?
4. Will it burn something that is held directly within the flame? Go to Comment
Torch of Black Fire
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Ramhir's comment on 2010-09-27 08:28 PM
I like it. A light source that is invisible to all others. My players will love it. 3/5 Go to Comment
Ouvulailio
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Strolen's comment on 2003-12-02 04:00 PM
Now what? What do you use it for? Elves use it for a decoration so why would they even think to use it in battle in the first place? You give no plot points to it, no special uses, only the vaguest of history that sounds like any other battle ever heard of.

The thing is we are looking for unique items with unique history. Need something special to make it stand out. They are too generic with little or nothing to use in it. Please read through some 5 stars and get a feel for what is a good submission. Look at the depth, detail, descriptions, and uniqueness of the submissions and then try and rewrite this one to add some things.

Wonder where the 5 vote on this one came from? Go to Comment
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