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XKH-71 Panther rifle
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dark_dragon's comment on 2014-05-07 09:54 AM
ie: hand-wavy science fiction Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
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Kassy's comment on 2014-05-07 09:20 AM
4.0/5

Lethal. Expensive. Ass-kicker.

Neat piece dark_dragon. Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
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Nafar's comment on 2010-09-20 07:34 AM
Plus, its gonna ratchet up the price even more if you have to buy it on the black market. This kind of thing would be extremely restricted. Go to Comment
Raid on Tantalus IV
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manfred's comment on 2007-09-27 09:58 AM
As a quest submission, the plot is very precise about the universe it is set in, it actually defines it to a large degree with the sheer amount of details. Luckily, it can be adapted to other settings of the genre with some ease. Solid submission here, dark_dragon. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-26 12:31 PM
Wow. I got this awesome Warhammer vibe off of this piece with a swirl of Shadowrun in it. Awesome stuff, guns, AI robots, genies with turquoise eys.

Thumbs up. Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-21 07:11 PM
Looks promising! Keep it up!

Afterwards we want Drizzt and the gang! Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-26 01:54 AM
Well, he said he wanted to make Drows, demons and all the other cliches. I am holding him to his word, that is all. ^^ Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-05 01:39 PM
Edit: In the briefing "employer" does not wish to be named, not employee.

A little better organization would really improve on what is already an exceptional post. Detailing the plan (aka waypoints) that you have in mind the for the PCs would make it an easier read.

Also are the PC undercover or are they burglars? They seem to be a little bit of both in different scenes. You suggest they may have to avoid cameras and such when the train breaks down, but the Keepers take them junior guardians.

Finally the last room. Does the Liberty command not know the Mimints took the station, and do they not know about the prototype room? Do they not care?

I like the mission and the background a lot, and this sub deserves a high score. But the plot could use some fleshing out, and you seem to detail a lot of the red-herrings more than the major action points. Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2007-09-26 01:09 PM
Yeah, this one is a gem! Great job dark_dragon! Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-09-25 11:55 AM
AG, you're being a bad influence again!

(It does look promising so far, though!) Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2007-09-27 02:08 PM
Solid. A worthwhile Sci-fi scenario: It reminded me of the film "Screamers" (about soldiers trying to get off a planet overrun with killer machines). Go to Comment
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dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-25 01:07 PM


Updated: There is some material that could possibly bother people's delicate civility in this piece. If anything gives you an adverse reaction, please PM me.

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dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-25 08:48 PM
Updated: This is probably far too long and highly incoherent, as it is 02:40 AM as I finish this post. Nevermind. Questing done.
Inspiration for mood and tone of the end fight sequence: Starship Troopers->the brain, Resident Evil(film)->the red queen, Doom3 spider boss.
Inspiration for the facility: Resident Evil(film), Half life 1 and 2, Doom 1, 2 & 3, Deus Ex: IW->the magrail labs. Go to Comment
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kaos2571's comment on 2007-09-26 08:57 PM
Good Job, nice. Go to Comment
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-07-16 11:24 AM


Despite the space faring premise, this piece screams "Shadowrun scenario" to me, with the majority fo the details easily alter to fit the setting. (Rather then another planet placing this in a suitable wasteland far from civilization, adjusting a few bits to include the magical ambience and races of Shadorwun setting etc..)



Very well put together and added to my favorites list for later use. 

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Kassy's comment on 2014-06-07 06:53 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Shelves of the Forgotten
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manfred's comment on 2007-11-16 01:48 PM
I love this one, too, but I've desperately tried to create another piece for the collection... and came out empty.

It is a great idea, and it deserves some more posts. Go to Comment
Shelves of the Forgotten
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manfred's comment on 2007-11-16 04:57 PM
One half-idea I had, was that an anonymous building (built on the ruins of a former anonymous church) hides the remains of a historical personality, that is unaccounted for, the likes of Richard Lionheart, or for a more modern touch, say, Jimmy Hoffa.

Maybe you can start something with it. Go to Comment
Shelves of the Forgotten
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manfred's comment on 2008-01-25 02:51 PM
Nice! It seems the real world is a more attractive venue for items of this sort. Go to Comment
Shelves of the Forgotten
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Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-24 01:47 PM
Niiiiiiice idea! I'll be sure to add something to it when something suitable comes to mind. Go to Comment
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