Strolen\s Citadel content. 
Starkin Entities
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (World Wide)
Murometz's comment on 2010-03-01 11:06 PM
as one who semi-follows the RP, and enjoys it, i must say a fun little universe takes shape here. More! Great names! Go to Comment
Starkin Entities
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (World Wide)
axlerowes's comment on 2013-01-01 08:04 PM
It does not really stand on its own, but I like the content. The information presented is straight forward and lays out seeds for other story's or situations. It would not make much, a few headers and an summary or intro paragraph to make this into some thing that works on its own and has a clear voice and sense of perspective. Go to Comment
Starkin Entities
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (World Wide)
valadaar's comment on 2013-04-30 05:03 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The 30 of Selador
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
B9anders's comment on 2009-05-08 07:46 AM
I like this. It provides a nice rooster to the setting that gives it character and depth. Will make it easier for the setting to come alive in the hands of the GM. Go to Comment
The 30 of Selador
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
dark_dragon's comment on 2011-07-26 08:48 AM


Kassy: this sub is WORK IN PROGRESS. I was just jotting down ideas rather than writing a sub. I'd like to find someone to collaborate with to flesh out the relationship between the 30 members of the reigning house of Selador. It also needs reformatting for the new site. Would you care to help?


Go to Comment
The 30 of Selador
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Regional)
Kassy's comment on 2011-07-26 08:38 AM


Punctuation!



Less run on sentances and no walls of text please.



Other than that, you have some good ideas.


Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-27 03:33 PM
Man, that is one BIG gun. Solid scifish work for the far future.

And to add at least something, don't forget the other limiting factor of the weapon: it's gonna be expensive. Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-26 12:08 PM
Very detailed and specific, something I am sure that some members here will appreciate. The idea seems interesting and viable, is there anything that offers protection from this weapon? Reading through this sub it seems like it cuts through everything with ease, and i would think it would be monsterously heavy if only for the weight of the ammunition.

40 rounds of 25mm/75mmL ammunition comes out to weigh something in the area of 100 pounds.

(557.5 lb/cubic foot for copper, 94.30 cubic inches for the volumne of the ammunition or .18 cubic feet, resulting in a mass of 100.35 pounds or roughly 45 kilos. That's alot of weight to tote around.) Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Cheka Man's comment on 2007-09-26 11:51 AM
*wishes I had one of these. Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-26 12:04 PM
Oh my! You'd make holes in the entire citadel!

*sternly wiggles index finger* Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
valadaar's comment on 2007-09-26 01:35 PM
Nicely done -I appreciate the detail as well.

Though what type of powersource is it? 4200 discharges with the described effect sounds like you would need fusion or even more exotic... Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-26 01:08 PM
Updated: Updated for the weight problem. Should have worked it out.... it now comes to 6.35KG per magazine. (the weight of the weapon was revised too) as for portability, don't forget that the people who use these are about seven and a half feet tall and have been genetically modified for increased muscle bulk. Thanks a lot, though! Their weight was far too much before Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-26 01:19 PM
Thanks a lot scras! That was a serious problem with the weight.

In term of protection, ceramics will do the trick. If they are strong enough to resist the kinetic impact, they can stand the heat pretty well (think space shuttle). But, you can't have a metal or fabric coating, otherwise the plasma splash will set it alight. This pretty much rules out personal protection, since you'd have to have top to toe ceramic armour. If you can afford it, though, vehicles can be pretty effectively protected with ceramic tiles. (reactive armour is pretty useless though)

Regarding the portability, most of the people who use these have an exosuite anyway, so it doesn't pose many problems. Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
dark_dragon's comment on 2007-09-26 02:05 PM
Thankyou! I was thinking zero point energy microcells. Go to Comment
XKH-71 Panther rifle
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Nafar's comment on 2010-09-20 07:34 AM
Plus, its gonna ratchet up the price even more if you have to buy it on the black market. This kind of thing would be extremely restricted. Go to Comment
Raid on Tantalus IV
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
manfred's comment on 2007-09-27 09:58 AM
As a quest submission, the plot is very precise about the universe it is set in, it actually defines it to a large degree with the sheer amount of details. Luckily, it can be adapted to other settings of the genre with some ease. Solid submission here, dark_dragon. Go to Comment
Raid on Tantalus IV
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Scrasamax's comment on 2007-09-26 12:31 PM
Wow. I got this awesome Warhammer vibe off of this piece with a swirl of Shadowrun in it. Awesome stuff, guns, AI robots, genies with turquoise eys.

Thumbs up. Go to Comment
Raid on Tantalus IV
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-21 07:11 PM
Looks promising! Keep it up!

Afterwards we want Drizzt and the gang! Go to Comment
Raid on Tantalus IV
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2007-09-26 01:54 AM
Well, he said he wanted to make Drows, demons and all the other cliches. I am holding him to his word, that is all. ^^ Go to Comment
Raid on Tantalus IV
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
axlerowes's comment on 2009-04-05 01:39 PM
Edit: In the briefing "employer" does not wish to be named, not employee.

A little better organization would really improve on what is already an exceptional post. Detailing the plan (aka waypoints) that you have in mind the for the PCs would make it an easier read.

Also are the PC undercover or are they burglars? They seem to be a little bit of both in different scenes. You suggest they may have to avoid cameras and such when the train breaks down, but the Keepers take them junior guardians.

Finally the last room. Does the Liberty command not know the Mimints took the station, and do they not know about the prototype room? Do they not care?

I like the mission and the background a lot, and this sub deserves a high score. But the plot could use some fleshing out, and you seem to detail a lot of the red-herrings more than the major action points. Go to Comment
Total Comments:
120

Join Now!!




Fatal error: Call to undefined function top_menu() in /home/strolen/public_html/lockmor/application/views/citadel/vfooter.php on line 2