Borakki are a cross between Vikings and 8' tall Scotsmen that herd giant ants. I could post a more detailed description, but there is no category for race or species, so where would it go? Go to Comment
A race would go to Ideas? Yikes. Most of the ideas are very small. I don't think it would be polite to spam the ideas section with 2-3 pages of race information. I suppose I could post somewhere on the forums.
It's powers are slightly cliche, and it has no backstory. Is there some reason that it does what it does? Even a simple cliche "wizard enchanted it" story would be better than nothing. I enjoy the side-effect, though. Sorry, Cmagoun, but I gotta give you a...
The side effect is pretty good, but I agree with the captain in that it needs some background. :) I will give it a literal '2', in that it 'shows some promise'. Flesh it out, and It could be fairly interesting.
If nothing else, adding a backstory will help YOU for future posts. A unique, catching backstory could also raise my vote another two points.
Looking at the item, I can see you have a mind for making submissions in here, Lets see you make another one :)
Also, dont forget the purpose OF the citadel - its designed to help one another share roleplaying ideas and advice, so if you're stuck with something, or just have a a base idea you think is worth expanding, by all means, post it in the Flesh it out section in the forums. Go to Comment
A world where there is a finite amount of magic present in the world, and it's almost used up. With the winds of magic being weak and unstable, how will nations built on the heavy use of magic survive?