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First Blood
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-17 07:18 PM
Nice one! Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-17 10:42 PM
Excellent!
Great backstory, interesting powers (though maybe a bit too many).
Just one question, what's a borakki?
Nice job, Cmagoun. Much better than your previous work.

4/5. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-18 10:53 AM
To Ideas. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-18 08:27 PM
Post it in Flesh It Out or Setting Forge, if you like. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-18 08:48 PM
By the way, this setting looks awesome-tastic. You should post it in Setting Forge. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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MoonHunter's comment on 2004-08-18 12:52 AM
Two thumbs and a tail up. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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MoonHunter's comment on 2004-08-19 12:28 AM
He means for the Forum entries of Flesh it out or Setting Forge. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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Scrasamax's comment on 2004-08-18 11:17 AM
I usually dont like magic weapons, but this was well done, well done indeed.

I would like to see game hooks, and maybe some dancing girls. Then it would be perfect. Until then...

4/5 Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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cmagoun2's comment on 2004-08-18 07:48 AM
Borakki are a cross between Vikings and 8' tall Scotsmen that herd giant ants. I could post a more detailed description, but there is no category for race or species, so where would it go? Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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cmagoun2's comment on 2004-08-18 05:48 PM
A race would go to Ideas? Yikes. Most of the ideas are very small. I don't think it would be polite to spam the ideas section with 2-3 pages of race information. I suppose I could post somewhere on the forums.

Chris Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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Murometz's comment on 2007-11-01 09:28 AM
Borakki are a cross between Vikings and 8' tall Scotsmen that herd giant ants cool! come back and right them up. And the setting too! :)

Excellent backstory on the axe. Go to Comment
Hagrida Belcare
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valadaar's comment on 2007-11-01 10:04 AM
Excellent! Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-04 11:13 AM
It's powers are slightly cliche, and it has no backstory. Is there some reason that it does what it does? Even a simple cliche "wizard enchanted it" story would be better than nothing. I enjoy the side-effect, though. Sorry, Cmagoun, but I gotta give you a...

2/5 Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-10 11:40 PM
Now THAT is an improvement!
I love the idea of the Nephews of Vadras- I will definitely use them. The ring I might also use, given the right situation.

4/5. Way to go, Cmagoun. Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2004-08-04 10:07 PM
The side effect is pretty good, but I agree with the captain in that it needs some background. :) I will give it a literal '2', in that it 'shows some promise'. Flesh it out, and It could be fairly interesting.

2/5 Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2004-08-05 07:15 PM
If nothing else, adding a backstory will help YOU for future posts. A unique, catching backstory could also raise my vote another two points.

Looking at the item, I can see you have a mind for making submissions in here, Lets see you make another one :)
Also, dont forget the purpose OF the citadel - its designed to help one another share roleplaying ideas and advice, so if you're stuck with something, or just have a a base idea you think is worth expanding, by all means, post it in the Flesh it out section in the forums. Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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Scrasamax's comment on 2004-08-06 07:26 AM
Okay, I have to applaud this rewrite. I think the band of brigands worshipping the mummified corpse of their 'uncle' is absolutely macabre.

4/5 Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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EchoMirage's comment on 2004-08-05 01:59 AM
The classic somebody-else's problem. We had that before. Several times, you know. Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-11-09 09:06 AM
This is actually quote good, and the author re-wrote it. Re-wrote it!
Wow. 4/5. Go to Comment
Ring of Nobody
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cmagoun2's comment on 2004-08-05 05:04 PM
Well, I suppose if this item is already a dead horse, I question the value of giving it a backstory. Oh well... Go to Comment
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