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The Blade of Chill
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chilled's comment on 2006-08-25 04:41 AM
Updated: wasn't supposed to be in work. Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-08-30 04:29 AM
i'll do my best, its goin to take quite some time though. Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-10-13 08:00 AM
cheers for the help manfred, will try to use some of your help. Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-10-15 08:18 AM
why?, how come? ... Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-10-20 10:41 AM
it's only a name i'll try to think of another... Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-10-25 06:15 AM
i get the point, it's just that i've benn pretty busy as of late and haven't had the time, will update it. Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2006-10-25 06:17 AM
i know, i know, i just haven't had the time lately i will work upon it now. Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2008-02-25 03:17 AM
**** this im going to rewrite the whole sub, i think ive finally come to my senses, thanks for the much needed and nagging(in a hel[ful way) encouraement!!! Go to Comment
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chilled's comment on 2008-02-25 04:03 AM
Updated: i decided to completley rewrite this sub as before i could now tell why everyone was nagging at me for not doing anything with what has potential.

thank you everyone for your help with this. Go to Comment
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pureionized's comment on 2006-06-07 03:11 PM
i think this is quite good Go to Comment
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pureionized's comment on 2006-06-07 03:11 PM
though it does need more work Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-13 12:44 PM
Might want to change where the elves are from. It's a great word, but I think the French would have notices elves :) Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-16 09:37 AM
Because it looks too much like a misspelling of versailles
http://www.a-castle-for-rent.com/versailles/

It is the most famous palace in France. Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-10-20 01:45 PM
Chilled! You can see how we all want this to live up to its true potential! Enough with building the suspense; grasp the hilt and pull this sword from its stone!

You've revised it a bit already, but looking at it, I would like to see a little bit more information added:

Why did the renowned High Elven smiths of Verasialles (I'm not fond of the name either) craft this weapon using the rare metal Morthile? What is special about this metal that it is so valuable?

What did the Elven champion that first wielded "Chill" call his unique fighting style? What was unusual about this style? Was he from the village, or do champions from distant lands quest to find the hidden village of the masterful elven smiths, there to petition the smiths that they might have a weapon crafted?

What kind of sword is it? I picture the sword as a longsword with a narrow, lightweight blade, constantly encrusted with frost. Beneath the covering layer of frost, an inlay of elven script can barely be distinguished, delicate letters running along the blade's fullers. Its silver hilt forms a protective guard that curves down to protect the fingers.

When wielded, what is the sword like? I don't mean game effects, you have that down. I mean, what does it look like to someone watching it? What does it feel like to be struck with it or to wield it? Go to Comment
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