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MoonHunter's comment on 2012-08-04 11:06 PM

Love the initial quote. The text is akward to read in spots. (I have only seen it since the wall of text has been broken).


Conceptually it is good. This post seems to be missing the answers to some basic questions and some immediate ones.


Where abouts do these monsters live? Do they attack other things than people? (I mean then why aren't the cities full of these things?)


How do we know about them killing things?  Perhaps description of the wounds? (and the result of an implied large claw)


The pack size means a lot of food that can hear them.


Sonar? They are stealthy, but can be heard.


They also seem to possess some form of intelligence as they appear to communicate with each other,  (replace the comma with a period).


If we can't percieve them, how do we know there are others (or groups)? How do we know they seem to be intelligent? How do we know they communicate with each other?


 


Good concept.  Execution just needs some umph

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Scrasamax's comment on 2012-08-05 10:02 AM
Moon pretty much covered it. I want the Dungeon Master side of this submission that has answers to the questions posed by the Peripheral Beasts Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2012-08-04 07:58 PM
3. +1 for the idea, -1 for the wall of text. So a 3. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2012-08-06 11:15 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2017-01-18 08:17 AM
What Scras said - we'd like some spoilers with our mysteries :P

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Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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chaoticwaffle's comment on 2012-08-04 08:02 PM
Sorry 'bout that. I went back and attempted to split it up better.
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chaoticwaffle's comment on 2012-08-05 11:54 AM
They live in plains regions and in the immediate forests bordering plains. They can be perceived just not directly looked at. In the peripheral vision they can be caught and even though they move quietly they can be heard, it's just difficult. Go to Comment
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chaoticwaffle's comment on 2012-08-05 11:58 AM
I also went and added a little more. Go to Comment
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Nomadic Library

       By: Murometz

Saril had a dream. To open a library in the windswept wastes of Naarish, so that the people of the many villages and towns spread over the hundreds of leagues of desert could discover the joys of his books. For a whole year he kept his library open, but alas, almost no one came.

That is when Saril came up with his new idea. If people didn't travel to read his books, he would travel to them! Saril closed his library, hired a team of twelve camels, loaded up the beasts with all of his books and proceeded to invent the first nomadic library.

Now children and adults alike, looked forward to hearing the bells of Saril's camels as he entered their villages, as he tirelessly traversed the deserts in a long circuitous route, visiting every village and town he came across, in turn. It came to pas that Saril's traveling library came to some fame, and that is how the folk of Naarish became literate.

A word of warning though. Naarish has only six thousand volumes. He deals with those that lose or steal his tomes quite "harshly", by bypassing the town or village which was responsible for losing one of his books for that calendar year.

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