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Reposia
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valadaar's comment on 2013-11-22 01:56 PM
Its a good description of the locale, and usable. The Tattoo link is a bit of a stretch - its a minor detail that does not sit at the core of the sub - its maritime nature is more so.

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Reposia
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-20 04:27 AM


Now that I've read the sub, it does seem the tattoo part is sort of secondary to Reposia as a location. I agree tattooing is somewhat a central part of their culture but now like you, I'm a bit uncertain whether this belongs to the quest or not. So I guess we'll wait for the next person/persons to decide.



Quite solid sub but need to ponder a bit before voting.

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Reposia
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caesar193's comment on 2013-11-18 07:08 PM
Update: I'm not sure if this belongs in the Tattoo Quest. I put it in mainly because the tattooing bit inspired the rest of the Reposian culture. If you feel that it doesn't belong among the quest subs, than I'll be more than happy to remove it. Go to Comment
Reposia
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caesar193's comment on 2013-11-22 08:25 PM
Update: As per suggestions, removed from quest Go to Comment
Reposia
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Water)
caesar193's comment on 2013-11-22 08:28 PM
Or did I? Doesn't seem to want to leave the quest submissions Go to Comment
Tauria
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2013-12-03 11:13 AM
Good solid location rife with interesting tid-bits to branch off from... Go to Comment
Tauria
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valadaar's comment on 2013-11-14 01:57 PM
An odd hybrid Monarchy/Republic, sort of like the Magna Carta going in and out of effect from time to time. A good nation with lots of details.


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Tauria
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Kassy's comment on 2014-06-20 10:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tauria
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Gossamer's comment on 2013-11-30 04:01 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tauria
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CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 02:05 PM
An entire kingdom wrapped up in a well organized document! Seems like many encounters could be created from this. I'd give you a 5 but I am out of votes for the day :( Go to Comment
Tauria
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CrazyF1r3f0x's comment on 2013-11-13 08:04 PM
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The Weeping Angel
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-11-02 04:32 PM
I'm impressed you worked it into Atheus! I would have just made a stand alone sub (that's what i did with my optional quest :p)

a useful item with a dangerous curse for balance. I like that the user sometimes sees the angel weeping from the corner of his eyes when his future is erased. Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-11-07 08:13 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
axlerowes's comment on 2014-03-08 05:01 PM
I would guess that he does. The attached picture has text links to the BBC and Dr. Who. Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
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axlerowes's comment on 2014-03-08 05:10 PM
Very strong clear prose as far as I am concerned. I the drawback section though you seem to strike a very different tone and approach it with a very different perspective (second person) than the rest of the piece. It is a little jarring, and it sort of ruins the in game immersion of the piece in favor of game mechanics. Perhaps it call all be in a blockquote.

Good stuff, I like the plot idea of trying to fight a villain with this. Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 12:32 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
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Renlim's comment on 2013-11-04 03:36 PM
As I'm reading this, I'm curious; the more times you used the statue dose the Angel show up more often to steal your future and make you do it over again in higher percentages. (This could be based on individual uses or days of travel.) Say the villain knows your every move, but the price for him at this point is the frantic repetition of recompleting nearly every task upwards of 2-3 times. The frustration of a life like that could be unbearable. Or better yet; the over use has caused an accidental system of practice where when you're finally allowed to actually finish a project its magnificent in nature, because of all the practice. Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
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Ifar's comment on 2014-02-24 06:58 PM
You realize the weeping angels are from Doctor Who, right? What you could do is that some of the statues could be magical and actually come to life. For the rest, read doctor who wiki Go to Comment
Civitas Caeli
Locations  (City)   (Space)
Strolen's comment on 2013-10-31 02:06 PM
I was ho-hum till the last paragraph myself. Good legends, nice thoughts, but the kicker that tied it altogether and caught me off guard was what it truly is. "until they are too wretched and tired and magic-deprived to do anything but watch"

Awesome! Go to Comment
Civitas Caeli
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Scrasamax's comment on 2013-10-27 07:32 AM
An interesting tale, and I like the fact that it is presented through multiple lenses, with the truth version presented in the end. It is strange, beguiling, and inviting. I like it. I want to map the city out like a living cell, with the inpenetrable fortress/tower/nucleus in the middle and the golden walls as the cell membrane, and the other various cellular apparatii having their own manifestations within the city.

How would the golden city respond to being looted? Gold is soft, so chopping hunks out it out of a wall wouldn't be hard for anyone with even bronze or stone tools. Go to Comment
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