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The Cartography Guild
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valadaar's comment on 2012-10-10 06:24 PM
You need to remove the imbedded ad. Go to Comment
The Cartography Guild
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caesar193's comment on 2012-10-10 09:18 PM
I did that once all ready! Sigh. Go to Comment
The Cartography Guild
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caesar193's comment on 2012-10-28 09:59 PM
Update: Got rid of the alcohol/women joke at the last couple paragraphs, and the spy thing. I didn't like the spy thing anyways. Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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Strolen's comment on 2012-10-14 04:31 AM
I think this is good enough to be a normal idea and get some votes! LOL Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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Strolen's comment on 2012-10-17 12:21 PM
I'll bite.

Eww, gross! Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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Scrasamax's comment on 2012-10-10 05:27 PM
I've heard there are some impressive shitstorms over poop hill. Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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Cheka Man's comment on 2012-10-10 09:31 PM
The PottyPortal
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-09 08:51 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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Ted's comment on 2012-10-11 08:20 PM
Reminds me of a certain chamber pot.. Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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MysticMoon's comment on 2012-10-10 04:41 PM
Used by farmers, you say? Sounds like a wizard collecting material for a specialized form of golem: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CEdOqYEwcT8 Go to Comment
The PottyPortal
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caesar193's comment on 2012-10-14 04:00 PM
Update: Acting on Strolen's advice, the PottyPortal is now a normal sub. I also added a bit about use and treasure. Have at it, voters. Go to Comment
Plains Elves
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Strolen's comment on 2012-10-11 02:49 AM
Is it bad that all I could think of is the elves creating some kind of land boat on wheels like land sailing in the desert? Windmills? I just see them using some kind of technology.

I like the idea of the split in the elves and provides a good reason they are there. I would think they accept their punishment as a sign of honor and stay in the plains, otherwise why not just move farther in another direction and find some new woods that they are used to surviving in? Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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Dragonlordmax's comment on 2012-10-04 05:57 PM
This submission has a decent overview of a culture, but I have one major problem with it - it doesn't really connect together. It seems like a bunch of disparate elements just kind of stuck together. If farming is so difficult on this plain, then wouldn't it make more sense to be nomadic and follow the herd animals? But seemingly, farming is important to these people. If it is, go with that; don't feel compelled to weaken "farmers in hostile land" by saying "but they're mostly hunter-gatherers." Also, there's nothing here that distinguishes them as elves as opposed to humans or dwarves or any other people.

I think that there's a lot of potential in this submission, but you need to develop it a bit more to make that potential shine through. Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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Aramax's comment on 2015-02-22 07:37 AM
Nice bit of fluff for elves. a bit more about culture would be nice, but nice textbook 3.5/5

Commenting Challenge Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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Ted's comment on 2012-10-03 12:48 PM
So first, what are those two things of HTML nonsense going through the middle of your sub? Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-14 02:39 AM
I like this sub overall- it does delve into sth unique for these plain elves although not a lot. One question I have remaining is that why are they forcing all puberty elves to move in with a different tribe that their birth tribe? To prevent inbreeding or some other reason? Nothing major that detracts from the sub but just curious. Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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Dossta's comment on 2012-10-03 03:50 PM
This is a good start; I like the idea of a plains-driven culture of elves. You put this under advice requested, so is there anything in particular that you wanted us to comment on? In general, I would suggest that you consider a few of the following questions (to make this piece really pop):

On the plains themselves:
* Are there any unique flora/fauna that have developed here? If so, have the elves formed a special bond or relationship with any of them?
* Are there any special locations or natural resources which the elves can use?

On the elves:
* Are they the long-lived type of elves? If so, consider how their long lives would affect them while living on the plains. Forest-dwelling elves can take decades to grow a tree into the exact shape of a harp or bridge, for example. Do these plains elves have similar long-term goals, plans or works that they are a part of?
* Do they still use iron and do they have access to a steady source of it? If so, to what extent does this frame their culture now?
* How is their relationship now with the forest elves? Has their language diverged yet, or are they still culturally similar?
* Are there other races that live on the plains? If so, how do they interact with the elves? Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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caesar193's comment on 2012-10-04 09:26 PM
I may not have made it 100% clear. They are nomadic. They do follow the herd animals. They also plant a farm during the spring, and let it be for the summer, then harvest during the fall. I'll go write that bit in now. Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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caesar193's comment on 2012-10-03 03:20 PM
I have no idea. I didn't put them there, I didn't want them there, but there they are. I did delete them once, but they're back. Probably just some ad. Go to Comment
Plains Elves
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caesar193's comment on 2012-10-03 04:32 PM
Good questions. I put this under the advice requested for that reason- I felt it needed something more, but wasn't sure what that thing was. I'll add some of those things now. Go to Comment
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