Voted. Here are some more typos;
the barbaric races that trying to kill him.
(Besides the forgotten word, I would change, the barbaric races to just; barbarians).
result in the victim sitting down, lieing down
coating the tips of an archer's corps arrows.
(Not sure about this one, but I suppose you meant like a division of Archers? Meaning it should be, archer corp's).
Also, in general, I feel that this piece has somehow been rushed a little and could do with a proof-read. I normally don't deduct points for minor typos etc. but for this sub I sort of did because I felt some of the sentences relied on the readers to make the logical connections as well as having the typos. For example, when you discuss the downside of the flowers, instead of leaving things hanging, you could add in a sentence somewhere to say when ppl are not under the thrall of flower and are uneasy, they might move on and foil the flower's "scheme". Currently, it just trails off into a description of how ppl are trying to find a reason for the unease and I get a bit of a question mark on what this paragraph is trying to tell me.
I don't mean to be somehow negative abt this sub as I think it a solid one but I just think that it would benefit from some editing.