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Heather's Corpse Ship
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-05-04 05:59 AM


Wonderfully ghouslish addition to the necromancer spell listings, and finding the wreckage of this nasty ship could make for a stomach churning encounter on some remote island (especially if the creator is still lurking near by.


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Heather's Corpse Ship
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Silveressa's comment on 2011-05-04 06:00 AM
thanks for cleaning this up, made for a enjoyable read! Go to Comment
Heather's Corpse Ship
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Fallen Angel's comment on 2009-08-23 05:08 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Heather's Corpse Ship
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Moonlake's comment on 2009-04-02 12:32 AM
You go into Pieh's Codex and scroll to the bottom of the page. In the textbox under the text that reads "Suggest a submission:" type in the title of this submission. Go to Comment
Heather's Corpse Ship
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Nocontrivedname's comment on 2009-04-16 11:53 PM
This I feel like I should vote on. It really is a good one. This is a solid spell. But really stop being passive aggressive. Go to Comment
Heather's Corpse Ship
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slartibartfast's comment on 2009-04-06 05:43 AM
Novel idea! Go to Comment
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-26 04:45 PM
Ha! Just refreshed this page and saw what you changed your previous comment to. You've got a wicked sense of humour, sir, but my hats off to you for the change. It certainly no longer distracts from the post. Go to Comment
Heather's Corpse Ship
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-26 04:47 PM


Interesting boat.  Loved the part about how the type of boat changes based on cultural origin of the bodies.


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Heather's Corpse Ship
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Ramhir's comment on 2010-10-26 10:58 AM


Icky-poo! I don't like or play necromancers, but for those that do, this would be a useful spell. Sure, it needs to be updated for the magical and rule system being used, but that is true of any of the subs, which is one of the site's strengths. 



Sorry, I just don't see MoonHunter's comments as vindictive, Axlerowes. MH was just pointing things out that, in her (or his, we need a gender-neutral pronoun, since we don't know the gender of the poster!) opinion, needed to be addressed. Likewise, in her opinion, the writing was stilted. That was her opinion, I didn't really notice it, but it is all grist for the writer's mill. If a significant number complain, perhaps you should try to do something about it. Remember, the writer's goal is to suck the reader into his world, not the reader's goal to be sucked in. If it isn't working, it is the writer's responsibility to fix it. You will never be able to catch all the readers, but a good writer tries to. (End of Creative Writing teacher's rant!)



Anyway, a useful sub. 3/5


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Heather's Corpse Ship
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Ramhir's comment on 2010-10-26 07:58 PM
Thanks for explaining, Axlerowes. I couldn't figure out how you had been on this site so long and posted so much, and still were angry at what MH said. This makes much better sense.

I still stand by my rant, but it no longer applies to you, and never should have. I'm still new to this site, but I've seen a bunch of hurt feelings from writers that could not accept that their words were not golden and really ought to be polished some more.

I didn't know you *could* change the posts after you'd made them. Thanks for the info.

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Heather's Corpse Ship
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-09-14 04:58 AM


Crimeny this is disgusting. I have to use it. :D


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edits for Wizard63
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2009-03-29 07:08 AM
Why are you using the citadel like this? Use the forums or comment. Go to Comment
edits for Wizard63
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-03-27 05:28 PM
When Wizard63 gives the okay I will delete this post. Go to Comment
edits for Wizard63
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Thewizard63's comment on 2009-07-07 05:30 PM
Thank you for your input. I appreciate your time with this.
You are OK to delete this. Go to Comment
SCIV (Land Shark) population control vehicle
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-03-23 10:06 PM
Seriously? I mean seriously?

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SCIV (Land Shark) population control vehicle
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-03-24 07:05 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
SCIV (Land Shark) population control vehicle
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EchoMirage's comment on 2009-03-24 07:17 AM
I am mildly amused. Very mildly. Sadly for NCN, there are not enough different naughty bits on the human body to nickname ALL the armored vehicles posted on the citadel. Go to Comment
SCIV (Land Shark) population control vehicle
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EchoMirage's comment on 2009-03-24 07:17 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Roack's comment on 2012-02-10 05:06 PM


A great post is detailed. A great post flows smoothly and is well-written. A great post is full of background, but easily lifted from its context and placed in a new setting. A great post has me crook-necked over my computer for the entire duration of my reading it, regardless of length. A great post gets a 5/5.



This is a great post.



The names immidiately made me think of Battletech, and then about half-way through, I realized I was reading a Battletech post. This is a great example of something that fits perfectly within a pre-existing setting.


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SCIV (Land Shark) population control vehicle
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Murometz's comment on 2009-03-25 10:20 AM
I'm no tech-mech expert, but I recognize a good one when I see it. Great details. 'Game use' is a nice touch. Go to Comment
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