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30 Halfling Holidays
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valadaar's comment on 2010-10-08 01:18 PM


Well done and I agree with Dossta about the links. You can also use the link widget of the editor to do links as well. 


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30 Halfling Holidays
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Dossta's comment on 2010-10-07 10:56 AM
A thoroughly enjoyable read. Many of these holidays can be turned into mini quests or adventures for travellers to halfling lands, so the list is also very useable. If you could fix your numbered links ( type the full name of the submission between square brackets eg 30 Exotic Birds ), that would help with the flow.

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30 Halfling Holidays
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Dossta's comment on 2012-10-23 10:49 AM
This is still one of my favorite pieces on the whole site. Let's bring it back to the spotlight for a bit. Go to Comment
30 Halfling Holidays
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caesar193's comment on 2012-12-01 04:27 PM
A day for the elders to complain about how things nowadays are horrible?
A day celebrating the clever defeat of ogres?
A day for a game that lasted 27 years this one time?

It is well worth the golden vote I just bestowed upon it. 5/5 Go to Comment
Cheka Man's comment on 2010-10-03 06:22 PM
I like this-magical forts. Go to Comment
axlerowes's comment on 2014-04-05 01:29 PM
I don't know if it would ruinously expensive.

http://skeptoid.com/episodes/4326

sorry to pull out such a lame website, but there is other stuff on them out there. Go to Comment
valadaar's comment on 2013-12-11 11:22 AM
As an external examination of these mysterious structures, this is excellent. Teds point holds as well - though it is possible to fill in the details oneself, it is always nice to have option of a ready made examination.

As for the fabrication of molten stone structures, magic would almost assuredly be needed. Getting enough fuel to melt non-trivial volumes of stone would be ruinously expensive.

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Ted's comment on 2010-10-03 07:54 PM
How about some DM info so I could possibly include these in a campaign? Go to Comment
The Law for Objects in Space
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Scrasamax's comment on 2014-03-02 11:17 PM
Feels like Firefly if the show had been written better. I know I will take flak for this, but I was never impressed with the show, because it had potential, but squandered so much of it on being basically cowboys in space, and there were many times when the production values just lost me.

This, however, while cut from the same cloth, is much better put together. There are a few spelling errors, and a few misplaced words (prison instead of the intended person) but it is minor. Go to Comment
The Law for Objects in Space
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2010-10-26 07:07 AM


Good execution, nice format and an interesting plot.


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The Law for Objects in Space
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Murometz's comment on 2010-10-05 10:25 AM
Wow is right. Love the NPC quotes and scene setters. Allows a non-sci-fi guy like me to get a strong sense of the plot and run with it! Go to Comment
The Law for Objects in Space
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Ted's comment on 2010-10-03 07:47 PM
Wow. Now THIS is good stuff. I can see this getting expanded even more, it's such a good base.

At the end, it would be useful to get some Character Summaries.

Otherwise, this gets a five. Go to Comment
The Law for Objects in Space
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Nafar's comment on 2010-12-13 12:55 PM


Some spelling issues but other than that, awesome!


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Chapter 6: The Sabatallee
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manfred's comment on 2009-10-24 04:19 PM
Love the details about the fat and social ranking, a great description overall. With sverigesson's note aside, it is a solid ethnographic description with quite a bit colorful history and essence packed in. Me likey! Go to Comment
Chapter 6: The Sabatallee
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Cheka Man's comment on 2009-10-23 06:43 PM
A well-made group of people. Go to Comment
Chapter 6: The Sabatallee
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axlerowes's comment on 2009-10-25 11:46 AM
I have tried to make some changes, but I would love to get some edits if you have the time. Go to Comment
Chapter 6: The Sabatallee
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sverigesson's comment on 2009-10-23 07:27 PM
This is truly a great write up for a culture. I would give it a 4.5 or 5, but there are numerous grammatical errors that drag it down slightly, so it gets a 4. Keep it up, and I hope to hear more about this land of Parna. Go to Comment
Glider Bombs
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manfred's comment on 2009-10-18 03:15 PM
Imagine the evening sky, sun setting, the night is almost here... and a host of triangular things slowly floating upon a city. Soon they will be invisible and find their targets.

Surely they have their weaknesses, but they do fill a niche, as said. Go to Comment
Glider Bombs
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Siren no Orakio's comment on 2009-09-14 02:38 PM
Its a reengineering of the laser guided bomb, (the first case) and the MIRV ICBM, which we've been using since Vietnam and 1986, respectively. I suspect this will be used in a similar manner- the main delivery vehicle handles the risk over 99 percent of the flight time, this only flies the "last mile", and as such, is generally not particularly easy to handle in the chaos and surprise of war.

Not terribly bad, all in all, it's just one more niche filled. Go to Comment
Glider Bombs
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Scrasamax's comment on 2009-09-11 01:20 AM
Since the gliders seem to rely on remote operation, aren't they going to be vulnerable to signal jamming or worse for the deployers, signal hacking? Go to Comment
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