Not all Mercs are Evil. True that. All mercs I am going to use as bad guys in my campaign are (or are somewhat bad). These guys are going to be used as the anchor for a campaign


Tell me when you are done and we will see what comes out when the ball gets lobbed back to me. Already scribbling an idea or two. Go to Comment

Not bad, a bit more altruistic than I would expect of a mercenary company. What kind of toys (tanks, helicopters, aircraft, etc) do they actually use? Go to Comment

Hey, Cheka, are you perchance related to Captain obvious? :D

Well, let's put it so, some merchs are sure evil and ruthless bastards. Some just make a buck. Those who have higher ideals and put them ahead of cash are, methinks, rather rare. Go to Comment

Mercs that are not evil. Go to Comment

You might find it better to make this a scroll and add scroll entries if you're going to be continually adding new material. That was the entire reason for scroll submissions, and it'll help the rest of us locate the new material. If you're not wanting others to add to it, you can set it to be so when you make it a scroll. Go to Comment

Lots of great detail Love the phrase "Freedom's Shadow:. Go to Comment

Updated: Just fixing a couple of things. Go to Comment

Just a quick note: this isn't finished yet. I'm going to add some more things about their leaders, equipment, organization, and training methods soon.

Oh, yes. And Moonhunter?

Ball's in your court, mate. :) Go to Comment

Pretty much, man. Go to Comment

I'll be adding in equipment soon. Go to Comment

Updated: Added in info on the weapons and training regimen. Go to Comment

Hey, I'm just sayin' that I put my money where my mouth is, just like you and one other guy told me after I commented on Blacksword. That's all I'm saying.

Besides, I had been thinking of this for a while before I posted it. Go to Comment

Very much enjoyed the descriptions and his personality. I like him quite a bit as a quite colorful character. The demon part seems more of an aside than anything and perhaps these horns eventually fall off or recede as an inconvenient set of warts or growths. That would feed right back into his sarcastic and raw attitude about his situation.

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As usual, I enjoy your droll style of narrative writing. Moreover, I also like the personal quirks that you've added to this guy, as well as the ironic suggestion that he was expelled from the Univarsity precisely becuase he was a more competant mage that his fellow students and teachers. The only complaint I have, is that while giving him a demonic background was a unqiue twist on the orignal entry, it should merited somewhat more attention. After all, it's not an every day occurance for some hell-spawned fiend to bear a part-human infant. All in all though, this is a rather enjoyable sub. Go to Comment

I like him although he's a bit of a fanfiction carecter. Go to Comment

Btw-you forgot to click the Quest box on your submission. Go to Comment

I find myself liking this character, and  this line,

-King Lorenzo’s boots: As mentioned, these boots are supposedly enchanted so that they will never fall apart. When one asks Vairs about them, he’ll just reply, "All I care about is the fact that they fit me."

 

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Hey scotsman, I'm going to take that  "#27." out of the title for you. Holler back if you prefer to have it there. Lance-Lieutenant Hailland Vairs sounds considerably better than 27. Lance-Lieutenant Hailland Vairs. And is easier to find/search for  :)

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I like him as well - your characterizations are quite amusing! Go to Comment

Updated: Just fixed a typo. Go to Comment