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Ginford Lena
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2004-08-02 12:03 AM
Hmmm...
Allright. Good description with some minor syntax blips, although I'm not entirely sure what "Bard clothes" entails.
Background is not particularly interesting, but it is good. I'm not sure that the way in which he became so good at illusions is very well explained, even if you factor in Mazza's magical aptitude.
Thank you for not giving us a bunch of D&D stats. You described the spells well, in enough detail to tell what they do, but not too much.
Overall, average.

3/5. Go to Comment
Ginford Lena
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MoonHunter's comment on 2004-08-02 01:32 AM
A nice average character, an NPC to fill out an tavern or faire. It has a small hook to explain its travelling. The history gives some reason as to why he is a competent illusionist. It is an average entry in my mind. Go to Comment
Ginford Lena
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MoonHunter's comment on 2005-10-29 03:56 PM
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Ginford Lena
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valadaar's comment on 2013-05-01 11:38 AM
A good filler character, and the positive outlook despite his loss is interesting. Go to Comment
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In the Bright Waters

       By: Wulfhere

"Look, lad! You see the streak of glowing green off the larboard bow? Them's the bright waters!"

While the lad peered intently at the eerie glow, the old salt continued. "Entire ships have been lost to the Bright, lad, for once you let it surround you, you'll never touch land again!"

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