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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-11 08:13 AM
Well, nothing to say that hasn't already been said. Top marks for this jewel. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-08 05:27 PM
I think that this is well done. 5/5 Go to Comment
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-09-08 08:22 PM
This has got to be the finest write up of (among other things) a beggar guild that I ever saw. Truly remarkable, there is nothing I can do but to love it.

One question:
So this Petra has crashed in the temple of a god of charity, right? Why doesn't the city guard intervene when a beggar, albeit a queen among beggars, crash in a respectable temple? Is this some sort of impoverished guild that has no standing with the watch?

At first I believed the "brotherhood of charity" was a front for the beggars, but your words made me doubt that. Please explain. Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-08 03:24 PM
Nice work Wulfhere. It doesnt read like your typical city quadrant. I like your style of writing. The details and "dropped hints" of future, possible follow-up submissions are great!

Its strange, there is nothing super-unique or original here, but I enjoyed every line!

Liked all the names too. They all fit snugly together.

Great first post and welcome! Its easy to tell from this piece, that I for one, will enjoy your future submissions.

oh and I think (not sure) there is a Moon Hunter Codex or Scroll, which you can attach/link this "slice of a city". Go to Comment
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-03-23 07:19 PM
I agree with Muro for the most part. Overall there is rapid fire laundry list of places but I enjoyed that you didn't present them as a list-lists are the the citadel's greatest vice-and stuck to single narrative flow. You have a created vibrant and energetic setting. Thanks Go to Comment
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-08 07:17 PM
Excellent! Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-09 02:04 AM
Updated: I added more information about the Temperate Brethren and their dealings with Petra, and explained why the Watch is seldom advised of what goes on within the market. Go to Comment
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Ouroboros's comment on 2007-11-09 04:41 AM
This and its sister piece, Dovecote Rookery, are two of the best posts ever on this site, IMHO. It deserves another HoH. Amazing work, Wulf! Go to Comment
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Kuseru Satsujin's comment on 2008-03-16 10:35 AM
Truly an awe-inspiring masterpiece, fit for easy placement within anything from a well-written fantasy novel, to the latest sourcebook for a fantasy game. Just reading it inspires me to create new material. Go to Comment
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