This has got to be the finest write up of (among other things) a beggar guild that I ever saw. Truly remarkable, there is nothing I can do but to love it.
So this Petra has crashed in the temple of a god of charity, right? Why doesn't the city guard intervene when a beggar, albeit a queen among beggars, crash in a respectable temple? Is this some sort of impoverished guild that has no standing with the watch?
At first I believed the "brotherhood of charity" was a front for the beggars, but your words made me doubt that. Please explain. Go to Comment
I agree with Muro for the most part. Overall there is rapid fire laundry list of places but I enjoyed that you didn't present them as a list-lists are the the citadel's greatest vice-and stuck to single narrative flow. You have a created vibrant and energetic setting. Thanks Go to Comment
Truly an awe-inspiring masterpiece, fit for easy placement within anything from a well-written fantasy novel, to the latest sourcebook for a fantasy game. Just reading it inspires me to create new material. Go to Comment