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The Eternal Witness
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-08-23 12:36 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Strolen's comment on 2008-04-27 09:36 PM
This was a TON of fun to read. I love it! Great store, great visuals, great products, great fun. Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-09 03:28 AM
Beware the shop that claims to sell love potions, wheter it is truth or not. :)

Good work! Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-11 09:09 AM
Oudall’s Transmigration Paste!

I like this quite alot Wulfhere! The ambiance is great, as is the realistic bumbling of its owner, misplacing and accidentally using potions, keeping the old sword. I wonder though, does he or can he leave the shop, could it transmigrate while he was oout getting a spot of food to ea, or would it still be there when he got back? Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-08 07:20 PM
5/5 I want to buy stuff here. Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-08 06:48 PM
love the fact that Mumwertz will grab his relic falchion and start swinging if necessary :D

nicely done again Wulfhere!...link this to 'Plenty O' Enterprises', Mourngrymn will thank you. Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-08 07:04 PM
"flawed potions" it is! *POOF* Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Murometz's comment on 2007-09-15 05:54 PM
Ardent Unguent of Ix, Elephant Nail, Eyeteeth of St. Dissam, Oudalls Transmigration Paste, and Coltons Curse of Insatiable Frenzy.

Yes, I believe we have a properly classic and splendid apothecary shop here! Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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valadaar's comment on 2013-10-22 11:49 AM
Ah, such a great sub. Where did you go Wulf? You fell off the world again! Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-08 06:57 PM
I haven't yet figured out how to link or add to scrolls properly. When I do, I'd like to link this one up to the "flawed potions" scroll as well. I suspect that many of the items in the shop may be a little "off", much like the proprietor. Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-15 12:10 AM
...ESPECIALLY if it's true! Go to Comment
Mumwertz's Affectionate Elixirs
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-18 02:20 PM
Update: I added a couple of paragraphs about how Mumwertz deals with his store's tendency to evaporate at random intervals and added a new introduction. Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-09 03:44 AM
Little is left for me to say, it is a great neighbourhood post. One of those I would add into a city just because it is so good. Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-10 10:02 AM
I have given it the freetext 'Bassage Market', for all related posts to be together. You may also want to link them directly - via Suggesting a submission. We'll be glad to see more! Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-08 05:37 PM
Consider it linked to the Neighborhoods Codex

As these things go, the neighborhood is well done. Your writing style is straightforward and flows well. Your piece has a history (and shows how it changes over time) and strong versimilitude. It has nice detail, enough to help the quarter become "alive" in the mind of the players.

As a first submission goes, you are a breath of fresh air in Los Angeles. I am looking forward to your future submissions. Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-11 09:13 AM
Well, nothing to say that hasn't already been said. Top marks for this jewel. Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-08 06:27 PM
I think that this is well done. 5/5 Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-09-08 09:22 PM
This has got to be the finest write up of (among other things) a beggar guild that I ever saw. Truly remarkable, there is nothing I can do but to love it.

One question:
So this Petra has crashed in the temple of a god of charity, right? Why doesn't the city guard intervene when a beggar, albeit a queen among beggars, crash in a respectable temple? Is this some sort of impoverished guild that has no standing with the watch?

At first I believed the "brotherhood of charity" was a front for the beggars, but your words made me doubt that. Please explain. Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-08 04:24 PM
Nice work Wulfhere. It doesnt read like your typical city quadrant. I like your style of writing. The details and "dropped hints" of future, possible follow-up submissions are great!

Its strange, there is nothing super-unique or original here, but I enjoyed every line!

Liked all the names too. They all fit snugly together.

Great first post and welcome! Its easy to tell from this piece, that I for one, will enjoy your future submissions.

oh and I think (not sure) there is a Moon Hunter Codex or Scroll, which you can attach/link this "slice of a city". Go to Comment
Bassage Market
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-03-23 08:19 PM
I agree with Muro for the most part. Overall there is rapid fire laundry list of places but I enjoyed that you didn't present them as a list-lists are the the citadel's greatest vice-and stuck to single narrative flow. You have a created vibrant and energetic setting. Thanks Go to Comment
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