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The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-11 07:42 AM
Very interesting. I like the touch of the exotic in the foreign man who serves his lady, and the sort of low justice/law that he dispences in a very twisted fashion. I think this character has a good deal of potential. Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-11 11:58 AM
Drow or not, he is well written and well presented. As for turning cliche bad posts into decent ones, I have done that a time or three so you loose no points from me. Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-10 07:29 AM
Very well done. 5/5 Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-10-05 02:33 PM
Nice Villian with clever, interesting but not sufficating details that links him to all sorts of possible plot hooks. Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-10 02:26 PM
Nice little villian... Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-11 11:18 AM
Hatchet came about after I read an unfortunate submission from some time ago, a cliched "Drow Assassin". It made me wonder: What would such a creature actually become in a more realistic setting? Forced to abandon everything he'd known, blinded and scorched by the glare of the sun, surrounded by an alien people that he can barely comprehend... How would he survive?

Thus Hatchet came to be, a creature that wraps his burnt and damaged skin away from the sun's glare, hides what he is, and never lets his guard down. Miserable and unable to find a place in an alien land, he falls to society's lowest rungs. Taken in by a domineering female, he finally finds a resonance with his homeland and a role he can fill.

If Hatchet were actually one of the legendary "dark elves", how would the folk of the Market Quarter know that? A creature of ancient legend dwelling among them? Who would believe it?

Is Hatchet really a "Drow"? Who knows? In all likelihood, he's just a foreigner with a disfiguring skin disease... Go to Comment
The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Tauric's comment on 2011-07-27 10:35 AM


Okay, I wasn't really feeling this until I read the explanation. At first I thought it was a serviceable idea, touch of flavor to throw in, maybe a mid-level villian, but with the added fact of the drow, it has much more potential. If drow exist and are known, and he is found out, what implications will it have?  Will the authorities believe he is outcast, or think he is a spy? Will they kill him immediately or imprison him? If drow exist but are not known, what will they make of him if they discover him? 


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The Hatchet
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-07-27 02:31 AM


Reading through this I didn't put all the pieces together, but "drow" really pulled it all together and made it something special. I would have liked some inkling as to how he managed to 'punish' people as he does, is it connections? Psychological manipulation? Drugs? D. All of the above?


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The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Strolen's comment on 2006-09-12 10:14 PM
Great legend! Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
manfred's comment on 2006-09-09 09:55 AM
A legend, and a creature of age unimaginable... I like the atmosphere of the post. Short but sweet. Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Ria Hawk's comment on 2006-09-23 01:50 AM
Wow. This is... wow. I like the idea of spirits creating witnesses to prove that they've been doing their job. I also like how it's got the knowledge of the ages... but few would know to ask for it and fewer still would recieve it. Not just another "I know all, I remember all." Kudos. Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-09 10:39 AM
The write up is excellent. It has a nice balance of mythical and useful. Good background material. Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-12 09:46 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-11 08:05 AM
I live this piece, the writing is good and has a wonderful elder epic feel to it. Nice descriptions Wulfhere. Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-09 08:52 AM
5/5 Every one of your submissions have been good and it seems you're on the fast track to promotion. Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-09-12 10:31 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Pariah's comment on 2006-09-16 09:22 PM
Much applause and celebration. Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2006-09-11 11:24 AM
Beautiful! Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2006-09-23 12:03 PM
yeah, this is a great sub! Go to Comment
The Eternal Witness
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2009-01-23 12:45 PM
I think that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree.
-Joyce Kilmer Go to Comment
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