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The Airship Firedrake
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-19 06:45 PM
I would suggest italics in lieu of bolding. Other than that, its terrific! Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-19 10:12 AM
Actually, these would be cooler if they weren't unique - a massive air battle between fleets of these things would be a sight to behold! Shades of spelljammer, but not enough to affect my vote.

I was actually thinking about flying ships as well, but yours is far cooler then what I was thinking about... Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-20 01:40 AM
Updated: The entry was expanded and changed to incorporate the suggestions that I received from Cheka Man, Captain Penguin and Murometz. Thanks, guys! Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-16 11:36 AM
Goodman Slatterbite
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-16 11:20 AM
Which word is this using?

Normally I would launch into my "this should be two submissions NPC and item" rant. But, these two are practically one and the same. I am sure if you broke the staff, you would break the man... and if you kill the man, the staff will die too. It is a manifestaion of his hate and fear... without him it is nothing.

Nicely done all around though. I like all the various touches which explain this bastard and his item. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-17 08:18 AM
I like this, in a very morbid way :)

Nothing like a bit of scorn and hatred to complete one's day. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-16 07:29 AM
I like this one, the motivation is perfectly clear, and the staff of scorn is a great magic item, something that was created out of an emotional outburst rather than by a wizard in a tower. I do have to ask if it is Modest, or Goodman as the first name changes several times in the post. Finally, nice detail on the horse's decayed head. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-16 07:42 AM
A truely nasty staff this one, that I think would refuse to act if held in a woman's hands. 5/5 Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-16 11:31 AM
I think he's using the highly controversial "Whores-Hunting" :D Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-16 11:33 AM
By the way, using the name "Whore-Hunter" for a stave's name (as well as /the/ Whore-Hunter!) is well, wow, I'm blown away!

Horse head- you just made Francis Ford Coppola wince.

Vivid piece! Nice Wulf! Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Murometz's comment on 2007-04-18 02:54 PM
This is an incredibly vivid piece for me. Quite powerful. Salem witchtrials meets Inquisition, meets Something Wicked This Way Comes, meets Judge Holden of Blood Meridien, meets Kane, meets Evil Reverend, meets sinister rural justice and superstition. Gorgeous. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Murometz's comment on 2007-10-01 10:35 PM
Bump! I should be using this soon in a game Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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valadaar's comment on 2007-04-18 06:34 PM
Wow. An excellent, if disturbing, submission. Reminds me in passing of Kane the Puritan, but no where near as much honor.

Nicely done! Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-16 12:59 PM
The villian's name is Modest. "Goodman" is an honorific suitable for a yeoman landowner, chosen for its ironic significance. Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
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manfred's comment on 2007-10-30 09:07 AM
Good reminder, MJS! That and drums do really belong to orcs. Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-16 10:08 AM
Murometz is right, drums and orc go together like peanut butter and jelly. This is an nice interpretation and explanation of this aspect of Orc culture. Insert a little tribal politicing and it might explain why a tribe will do "unexplicable" things (as viewed by the humans) jsut before/ during/ after a battle. Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-15 07:06 AM
Not bad, I especially like the section on th Drums of Council, and the how shaman selection process. Nicely done. Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-15 07:33 AM
I like the council drums best. Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2007-10-29 08:53 PM
I'm a sucker for drums of war. The opening sequence had me dead on, from there I read it right trough. Great submission. Go to Comment
The Drums of the Spirits
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-14 09:33 PM
What do I think? Whats not to like, really. Drums and Orcs go together like hotdogs and donuts. Loved the hurdy gurdy description. I had to stop reading and visualize said instrument and the orcs playing it!

the opening monologue is great. I see the punchline coming, but its still a pleasant jolt.

There is a manfred scroll out there somewhere on "spirits" and all that they entail. I believe this sub might be a welcome attachment. I shall seek it out. There is also a musical instrument scroll, where these will fit quite nicely.

I am happy to inspire you with my faulty Norwegian. Orken Drommer indeed!! Go to Comment
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