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Kranno the Skulker and Vonyich Festelgabber
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-20 04:21 PM
I like this idea a lot.

Adventure Idea: The PCs meet Kranno and Vonyich and they become fast friends. Maybe even have an adventure together. Kranno then hears something he shouldn't and Vonyich publishes it. As soon the story hits the public the powers that be put a hit out on Vonyich and Kranno and the PCs have to help them get out the Kingdom

Adventure Idea: A PC becomes their new favorite subject. The PC finds that he know has undserved reputation, a fan base and further more can't take a leak without finding it public knowledge the next day. This all becomes a problem when the PC become associated with the backdoor man/mistress of a local Warlord and at the same time is contracted to carry a subtle spy mission. Go to Comment
Kranno the Skulker and Vonyich Festelgabber
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
valadaar's comment on 2006-09-20 01:54 PM
An excellent non-combat encounter! Awesome! Go to Comment
Kranno the Skulker and Vonyich Festelgabber
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-20 02:23 PM
Updated: I corrected a couple of typographical errors and inserted newer and more interesting ones... Go to Comment
Kranno the Skulker and Vonyich Festelgabber
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-20 05:05 PM
The nice thing about Kranno and Vonyich is that they can be as much of a problem if they are your friends as they are if they are your enemies. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-19 04:10 AM
Ahh, nasty... much to my liking in fact. Another lesson why you shouldn't play with fire. Good work! Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-18 09:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-19 05:15 PM
I like it, it's a bit "high fantasy" for me, in that everything is ensorcelled (and that magic seems to be pretty common).
ON the other hand, I love the setting details... It seems almost steampunk in a way, and I like the details about the free cities and the Hegemony, and the spell names are great.

However, the description seems a bit short.. I'm not sure what other details you could put into it, besides perhaps a more detailed description of the thing, and perhaps notes about its crew, but it ends quite abruptly.

In any case, it's a good submission. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-20 04:54 PM
It was my pleasure. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-21 10:20 AM
Good text, nice flavor elements, good explantions, and some nice dramatic areas. It is a bit high magic, but I love it. I like the bound demon corrupting the crew and the existing powerful "airship" ruling the skys. Truly a great submission. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-19 01:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-18 07:51 PM
5/5 What happens if the demon breaks free? Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-20 07:34 PM
I'm pleased that you valued what I had to say. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Dozus's comment on 2006-09-19 09:40 AM
A demon powered engine. Not bad at all. Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-19 06:45 PM
I would suggest italics in lieu of bolding. Other than that, its terrific! Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-19 10:12 AM
Actually, these would be cooler if they weren't unique - a massive air battle between fleets of these things would be a sight to behold! Shades of spelljammer, but not enough to affect my vote.

I was actually thinking about flying ships as well, but yours is far cooler then what I was thinking about... Go to Comment
The Airship Firedrake
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-20 01:40 AM
Updated: The entry was expanded and changed to incorporate the suggestions that I received from Cheka Man, Captain Penguin and Murometz. Thanks, guys! Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-16 11:36 AM
Goodman Slatterbite
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-16 11:20 AM
Which word is this using?

Normally I would launch into my "this should be two submissions NPC and item" rant. But, these two are practically one and the same. I am sure if you broke the staff, you would break the man... and if you kill the man, the staff will die too. It is a manifestaion of his hate and fear... without him it is nothing.

Nicely done all around though. I like all the various touches which explain this bastard and his item. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-17 08:18 AM
I like this, in a very morbid way :)

Nothing like a bit of scorn and hatred to complete one's day. Go to Comment
Goodman Slatterbite
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-16 07:29 AM
I like this one, the motivation is perfectly clear, and the staff of scorn is a great magic item, something that was created out of an emotional outburst rather than by a wizard in a tower. I do have to ask if it is Modest, or Goodman as the first name changes several times in the post. Finally, nice detail on the horse's decayed head. Go to Comment
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