Nice job. Unique enough to make me wonder why there would even be hundreds of them, but still a great item. The entire riddle is intriguing, perhaps the riddles are a map to where Tor-Gonesh traveled when he left his people and those translating the riddle could find him for a prize or knowledge in how to make them. Perhaps even have him create one for the seeker. Go to Comment
A nice weapon, it is a great mix of utlitity, style and attitude. Three things that every good heroic roleplayer will focus on, and the history of the item is nice touch that will make owning such a weapon as PC more enjoyable. They could also become collectable items. It makes me wish my group had a focused archer. Go to Comment
The Steelbows of Senek and his line are merely the most prominent examples of these rare bows. Dozens or perhaps hundreds of others exist, whether wielded by mighty archers or rusting in the collections of decadent nobles and well fed merchants. Some of these lesser known bows may even be as well crafted as their more famous counterparts. Go to Comment
Nicely detailed creature. I like the fact that these creatures "flip". They have a number of dramatic hooks (the growing flocks, the dangerous homeland to explore, the quest for curatives made from it, and so on). A nice addition to a game world. Go to Comment
"The curse allegedly causes cramps, fever, and vomiting so severe that healthy men have died from it."
Ah, sounds like a case of severe salmonella poisoning from poorly cooked fowl!
I like this submission - it's not often enough that we get simply a believable lifeform that isn't all-powerful or with some strange quirk.
This is easily something you could find on planet earth. Go to Comment
Not bad, but if feels like it was cut off halfway through. what are the curative power's of the bird's horn, can it be taken without killing the bird, and do the birds make for good eating? Go to Comment