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Stolvi the Screever
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-24 12:42 PM
It has been all said already. A nice submission! Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-24 01:32 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-23 07:17 PM
Another word bites the proverbial dust. (I'm halfway through mine).

Nicely done across the board. A lovely description for a character that most PC will just "miss". They won't get it, until they experience it. Perhaps someone will sense the supernatural about the man and the connection will be made. Perhaps a cleric will be directed to intervene on his behalf.

A perfect piece for a story. Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2006-09-24 09:16 AM
Once again, Wulfhere shines above the plebians!
I love how images can provoke thoughts and emotions. Hell, all advertisments use imagery to make us want something or think a certain way about something.
The Screever takes this into a different step - provoking emotions and causing change in the hearts of those who watch.
Anyway. Good sub ;) Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-29 12:11 PM
An interesting fellow, seemingly decrepid and melancholy, but inspired by a higher source that few would expect. There is a strong emotional undertone to this piece, and I look forward to putting Stolvi into a game.

The excerpts describing the art on the ground was the part that really did it for me, BTW. Go to Comment
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-23 05:48 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-24 08:47 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-24 09:40 AM
Most of of what I wanted to say has been already said. Another great piece Wulf! And I'm thrilled your jumping all over the Ye Olde scroll! I like your take on this one. I was very interested to see which direction one would go with a "Screever". Great take!

My only minor suggestion would be to once again use italics in lieu of bold. It becomes a weird read, when half the sub is bolded. Takes away from the aesthetic feel.

4.5 Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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valadaar's comment on 2007-12-06 08:22 AM
Wow, I completely missed this one before! Nicely done Wulf! Go to Comment
Stolvi the Screever
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-23 08:14 PM
I pictured Stolvi as a tool allowing the gamemaster to drop hints and congratulations hidden within his pictures. After all, his Angel wants to send her messages to heroes... Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-24 09:59 AM
Updated: Boldness removed. Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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manfred's comment on 2006-09-23 08:56 AM
An okey idea. A disctinctive weapon, that is harder to wield, and so the zero-sum principle is maintained. Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-23 12:21 PM
Nicely executed piece... though a touch sketchy on how the process.

It also brings up a question: Is there only 8 of these? Is there dozens upon dozens with those 8 being the special qualities? And how do the lesser quality ones fit in? Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-23 03:57 PM
Not bad Wulfhere Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-22 07:11 AM
5/5 for a great bow and a great backstory. Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-10-10 04:29 PM
Nice job. Unique enough to make me wonder why there would even be hundreds of them, but still a great item. The entire riddle is intriguing, perhaps the riddles are a map to where Tor-Gonesh traveled when he left his people and those translating the riddle could find him for a prize or knowledge in how to make them. Perhaps even have him create one for the seeker. Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-23 08:05 AM
Love the Steelbows of Senek, love the riddle part! Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-23 03:45 PM
A nice weapon, it is a great mix of utlitity, style and attitude. Three things that every good heroic roleplayer will focus on, and the history of the item is nice touch that will make owning such a weapon as PC more enjoyable. They could also become collectable items. It makes me wish my group had a focused archer. Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-03-17 11:40 AM
Dwarven Steelbows
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-23 12:36 PM
The Steelbows of Senek and his line are merely the most prominent examples of these rare bows. Dozens or perhaps hundreds of others exist, whether wielded by mighty archers or rusting in the collections of decadent nobles and well fed merchants. Some of these lesser known bows may even be as well crafted as their more famous counterparts. Go to Comment
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