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The Mourner's Cloak
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-26 04:54 PM
A useful item. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-28 06:45 PM
Good job Wulf. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 10:05 AM
This is an OK item. I guess I have been spoiled by your other submissions... :) Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-27 02:01 PM
Wow, I lost 3 XP for deleting my old vote...

Anyway, I like the change :) Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-27 12:33 PM
REVISED: I decided to flesh this one out more and add a more sinister side to the cloak's history. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-10-12 09:52 PM
I rephrased the rumor angle to make it seem less well known; only a few people have connected the incidents. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Wulfhere's comment on 2012-05-11 01:19 PM
In my mind's eye, I envisioned a sorrow-filled family member bringing the cloak to some sort of commercial mage, sadly asking that it be enchanted to ease the wearer's sorrow. The enchanter brought forth the magics his client requested, but lacked the ability and discernment to notice the malignant undercurrents within the cloak's comforting presence. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Kassy's comment on 2012-05-10 07:52 PM

A twisted piece of clothing for sure.

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The Mourner's Cloak
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PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-07-18 12:57 AM


I love how subtle it is, something that seems so innocuous and really is... mostly. Is there a particular reason for it to be the way it is? It has a history with the paladin's wife but I feel there should be more to it than that.


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Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-29 11:49 PM
Wow, you've been quite prolific as of late. Good tip of the hat to the olden days of the battered dice. Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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Ancient Gamer's comment on 2006-09-26 03:57 PM
A great old skool plot. Made me feel all Forgotten Realmsy again. Nice! I remember the reign of King Gygax by the way! ;) Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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Murometz's comment on 2006-09-26 04:21 PM
What everyone else said!

I like the old-fashioned feel of the piece. Everything is tidy and cleverly phrased! I too miss the days of King Gygax. Long live Old School!

Love the "Things Go Wrong" section. Realistic and entertaining. I also like the names here. They all fit. Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-29 11:39 AM
This is a really fun submission, and I like the demonic creatures impersonatting archetypes of girls we all knew in high school. Everytime, you start gaming for the day it takes a bit of exposition for everyone to get into character. This would be a great place to remind everyone that "hey it is D&D time". If I use this I will take your advice and inter-weave this into a larger quest. Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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valadaar's comment on 2006-09-26 10:45 AM
Excellent sub - a ready to use mini-module in my opinion.

Two points:

1. Too much of the sub is stuck in bold.
2. King Gygax - this a deliberate reference to poor old Gary? :) Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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valadaar's comment on 2006-10-30 06:58 PM
Ah, battered dice.

I had some D20s that were so battered, they were more marbles then anything else. The poor quality may have had something to do with that too. Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-26 10:51 AM
UPDATE: OOPS! I had a typo in one of the headings. The bold is fixed.

Of course, a dignified fellow like myself would never poke fun at an icon of roleplaying like Mr. Gygax... How many years ago was D and D first published? (scratches his head and pulls out the notepad and pencil...)

If people like this one, I'll try to make it part of a series of subs that revisit all the hoary old RPG clich├ęs, occasionally throwing a few twists into the works. Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-26 04:22 PM
Updated: I moved a few lines around to make things easier to follow and added a couple of minor details. Go to Comment
Ye Alehouse of ye Ruddye Draggon
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-10-11 05:54 PM
I wrote up a variation on the succubus that could be used here, The Lilitu. Go to Comment
Goddess of the Desert Cats
NPCs  (Major)   (Religious)
manfred's comment on 2006-09-26 01:33 PM
Nice one. I especially like how ellegantly she's found a foothold in another religion. Go to Comment
Goddess of the Desert Cats
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MoonHunter's comment on 2008-04-17 11:47 PM
Okay. I missed this one long, long ago. Well, that has been fixed.

While this is not of the Avontix series ( http://www.strolen.com/view.php?node=free_search&free=Aviontix ) it could be. She is the perfect substitution for the Cat Goddess in the pantheon of the Aviontix Gods, as she would be right now in Aviansis. There it would be a somewhat secretive cult, perhaps a lone tribe out in the sands and dry lands. Or one or two members in every tribe/clan.

Thank you Siren for a well placed HoH too. This is the kind of thing I like seeing HoHed, something from the way back that people haven't seen in ages... brought to the fore. Go to Comment
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