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The Sending of Axtrami
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-10-08 05:42 PM
Naturally, it ravaged the economy to lose all those 2 silver piece deposits. Go to Comment
The Sending of Axtrami
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MysticMoon's comment on 2013-08-26 10:41 PM
A nice bit of history. I'm liking the Ouzquin Dremorix. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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CaptainPenguin's comment on 2006-09-28 05:40 PM
I think it's very good (even though it is just the "mighty sword" cliche), lots of mystery and cool details, and I like the name.

There's just one thing I would say is a problem, and I didn't detract for it, because it's more of a personal preference- I would say that the name "Senek" (which suggests ancient Egypt) doesn't really fit with the Celtic names, and in addition, I would stray away from using overtly Celtic names (it just seems boring to me to use real Earth languages). But that's just my personal prejudice. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-29 01:54 PM
I love the post and the fact that the magic item has only the magic of reputation left.

You really need to put together either a mythic NPC post (for Senek) or a "Era Post" (Systems, Political Historical), to help ties these together. We have bits and pieces linked by some free text. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Iain's comment on 2006-11-14 03:45 PM
The link to the dwarven steel bows instead takes you to the Eternal Witness. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Iain's comment on 2006-11-14 03:46 PM
Yes, it's another sword, but it's a really good sword - and every world needs them. Some very nice touches - I like it a lot. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-30 12:00 AM
I have no problems with the names myself, I can change the ones that I don't like. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-28 01:38 PM
A magic sword that is no longer magical. 5/5 Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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axlerowes's comment on 2006-09-28 10:21 PM
The story of Senek seems more fun than the item. But as you said in the end, what makes the item special is that it was Senek's. Can you link this to other posts? Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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valadaar's comment on 2012-11-26 08:40 PM
A lovely treasure of a sword, with lots of possibilities!

Miss your stuff Wulf! Come baaaaack!


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The Sword Blooddrinker
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-28 05:28 PM
Updated: I added a few details that I'd overlooked, such as the sword's size and weight. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-28 06:35 PM
Thanks for the input, CP. You're right about the names; I was trying to loosely connect the item with a couple of my previous posts, with results that were a bit discordant. I hope to detail Senek and the history of the area in future submissions. These will reveal that Senek was originally a foreigner, who introduced advanced ideas of warfare and governance to the region in the course of his rise to power.

Unless a better explanation occurs to me before then... Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-09-28 10:37 PM
Eventually, I will be able to tie these together, but not yet. I need to complete some more posts first. One link that was established is that the Dwarven Steelbows were also possessions of Senek's dynasty.

The Druid-Magus Cuthbad Mac Corhan gained his supernatural wisdom from The Eternal Witness when the druidic mysteries were celebrated there, and indeed, the test that he devised to find the Warlord of the Clans may have taken place in the sacred grove dominated by that ancient, haunted tree. (Eventually, I would like to detail Cuthbad as well as his king.) Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-10-23 11:42 PM
Updated: Senek's name was changed to the new spelling of Senach. Go to Comment
The Sword Blooddrinker
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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-11-16 01:19 AM
Just keeping you on your toes...

It's fixed now. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-09-29 01:29 PM
This is a perfect Garage Sale item. It is subtly cursed, and some might not see it as a curse at all. This one has picked up a negative reputation, which I would like to see downplayed... otherwise no one will want to have the cloak (thus negating its effect(. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Nobody's comment on 2006-09-27 08:29 AM
Interesting Idea. I like it. It isn't an epic Item, but a very nice piece of work to throw in.

Suggestions: Fill out the story of the paladin. Make his story really epic. Then I would add in something about town gossip blah blah blah. Fill it out some you get the idea. You don't have to though. Not every item in Strolen's citadel needs to be a 5.0 item.

Hope that helps
-Nobody Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Scrasamax's comment on 2006-09-29 11:56 PM
Subtle yet fashionable, plus it plays on the basic desire for sympathy combined paradoxically with a moral superiority. Nice work. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Cheka Man's comment on 2006-09-26 04:54 PM
A useful item. Go to Comment
The Mourner's Cloak
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Pariah's comment on 2006-09-28 06:45 PM
Good job Wulf. Go to Comment
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