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Argnid
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Strolen's comment on 2013-06-10 02:15 PM
Tentacles! Outstanding.

Is it bad that I pictured the armor more like a garbage bag type? Kill the creature, remove the teeth and guts, step into it and cut out holes for arms. :)

Love it!!!!

Almost want to issue a challenge to see what others could describe about the picture. I feel the picture is the centerpiece allowing many interpretations. Great job on it!! Go to Comment
Argnid
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-06-10 06:03 AM
A very concise and to-the-point sub - while not large, it's full of information and has all you need to add to any game.

Also, the picture is incredible! I wish I could draw even half as good as you! Go to Comment
Argnid
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Cheka Man's comment on 2013-06-11 11:27 AM
Cut the arms off, and it's near harmless. The hard thing is cutting the arms before it gets it's jaws around you. Go to Comment
Argnid
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Murometz's comment on 2013-06-10 09:12 AM
Looks reminiscent of a Khargra. A nice and concise critter, as SE said. Of course one can extrapolate further....a mountain dwarf clan with massive Argnid-shell shields...the mystery of the vanished mountain climbers needs solving...something the Argnid couldn't digest (dingus PCs need) lies in a pile of poop in its lair, etc... Go to Comment
Argnid
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axlerowes's comment on 2013-06-10 04:32 PM
"What are you doing you daft fool, pick up the damn spear!"

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Argnid
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Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-10 08:33 PM
A solid monster lifeform and bonus marks for the image. Go to Comment
Fler
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Cheka Man's comment on 2011-09-15 07:31 AM


Nasty insects with no redeeming fewatures.


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Fler
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Murometz's comment on 2012-02-23 08:38 PM


I really like the way you describe the creatures. Straight-forward, clinical approach ftw! Detailed physical description, the ecology, how they attack, and the best way to thwart them.



"bits of fur between the carapace" is nice and icky

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Fler
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
valadaar's comment on 2014-03-19 01:57 PM
Now these are nasty - a very dangerous critter indeed.

There are some odd phrasings and what appears to be spell-check created weird words like ' smell to locate its pretty.' and 'only to find an Fler investigation.' Pretty sure that was to be infestation :)

Not bad.





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Fler
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-10 08:30 AM
Well-written and nicely done.

4.0/5 Go to Comment
Fler
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Dossta's comment on 2011-09-22 10:55 AM


Cockroaches + bats?  Ewww.  Good little nasty beasties to send after some human feasties.  Perhaps a bit too challenging for lowbies while they're swarming, but they'd make a great addition to any horror-themed plot.


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Fler
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
hylandpad's comment on 2011-09-15 03:58 PM


Gross, but very cool - swarmy, locusty, just as Cheka said, nasty.


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Girsh
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
Cheka Man's comment on 2011-09-09 11:46 PM


Giant Rabbits of Doom.


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Girsh
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2012-02-27 08:06 PM


Tundra, I too am a fan of your creatures. I'd take a moadi bird over a Girsh in my campaign, but this critter is also damn good. Nice mix of facts and fantasy!



Also, what Cheka said. Except, Giant Leonine-Rabbits of Doom!

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Girsh
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
valadaar's comment on 2013-07-02 12:11 PM
Pretty cool, though with the long ears, I assume they do not engage in too many territorial fights.

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Girsh
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-09-08 02:13 PM


Another top-notch submission. I love how all of your animals seem pausable and well tailored to their environment. The plot hooks seem a little on the thin side, but I'm still glad they're there. Thanks so much for posting the picture as well, most of your submissions are so clear I don't need one, but this creature is particularly complex looking. 


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Blydwyn potion
Items  (Potion)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2012-02-24 08:04 PM


Marvelous! I can only second hylandpad's comment and PoisonAlchemist's request for more of your alchemy!


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Blydwyn potion
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valadaar's comment on 2013-12-19 11:51 AM
An interesting way to present this. Nicely done! Go to Comment
Blydwyn potion
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Forganthus's comment on 2012-06-13 10:47 PM
I liked the potion recipe more than anything else in the sub. It makes me want to cook something. Go to Comment
Blydwyn potion
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hylandpad's comment on 2011-09-09 07:18 PM


VERY thorough and well done. This looks like something out of a stodgy old Wizard's musty tome of "De Arcanius Concoctius Orbium" or something of that like. I like your little annotations and footnotes, very authentic. Great Job!


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