Stomphoof - Xarn's hand can be used, and every so often, he can feel his hand brush up against something, so yes. His spells occasionally do nothing and he surmises, must be discharging in the other dimension to unknown effect. Go to Comment
first of all, any sub which features a foray into the forest of the FROG KING(!!!!!!!!) gets my attention. I will mark this for now, as first sub i'm reviewing tonight after work.
Weird but fascinating piece. I love the Frog-King, the dungeon could use some tightening and some more nifty detail, but its an interesting piece. Definitely some tidbits worth stealing for my campaign. Go to Comment
For a first post, it is excellent, though it does suffer from some spelling problems and some missing information.
Arronju- It is apparent much further down that he is some type of frog being, but that is not obvious at first. I would put some text earlier on explaining what he is. Go to Comment
For some reason, the site's code often drops apostropes and quotation marks when you copy text from Word documents. Apparently, the symbols aren't the same as the ones used at Strolen's, so the site doesn't save them. Go to Comment
i am sure tightening and spelling can be improved, specifics are always helpful... for whatever reason, most of the punctuation didn't convert. The detail on the relic/item was left vague on purpose, read - insert plot device here.
Thanks for the feedback.
**When my players when through this. They ended up decimating the frogmen hurting the king, who was fleeing. they flew, dim-doored, and max range lightning bolt and downed him (after crit on a Scorching Ray. and some solid hits.) Never got to the negotiations. So some experience/advise on tightening or detailing that area is encouraged.** Go to Comment
This sounds interesting. Frog people are a different sort of enemy. When I read this I think of the Redwall series of books... I am guessing you left the "relic" vague so that it could be made into anything by the DM. Nice job! Go to Comment
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