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Strolen's comment on 2008-04-21 08:03 PM
That is pretty much what I meant when I wrote this. Thanks for rewording it a bit for me.

I spent a lot of time trying to get the nuances just write so the flow of the plot hit a crescendo at just the perfect moment. I would have to say that this is my magnum opus and there is really nothing else I can do to improve on it. Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2011-01-03 11:04 AM
Saddest part was that when quality improvement was mentioned it wasn't my quality that was shown getting better but a comparison with another. ;) hehe Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2011-01-03 11:06 AM
I think the subtle depth and growth of the plot arc were perfected. They were very small changes as the original was quite complete and almost perfect. The low votes continuously amaze me but I know greatness when I write it. Go to Comment
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Strolen's comment on 2011-01-03 12:10 PM
Bows in appreciation for bringing back to the forefront such an elegant post. Happy New Year! Go to Comment
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manfred's comment on 2008-04-22 04:22 PM
Yay pretty! What a timeless piece. It was things like this that drew me here. Or not??? :)

Good reminder. Go to Comment
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Agar's comment on 2002-11-16 08:58 PM
Hmm yes, forgotten mine. Well, is it just there's a shortage of holes in the ground that has everyone worked up over it or could this be like the Dutchman's mine? A mine that was found by one guy in some naturally hidden backwater place where everyone overlooks, a motherload vien of precious metal, more than anyone could work out in a life time. But the Dutchman had distrust instilled in him so much, he never told anyone where it was.

Maybe some of the decendants of the miner who created the abandoned mine would like to lay claim to their inheiritance now that it's been found. Of course they could offer the players ridiculous sums of money that is in the mine they will be helping to clear out. And also, the mine in question could be an entirely different mine altogether, but how will anyone know that for a fact untill iafter/i the mine is empty? Go to Comment
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MoonHunter's comment on 2006-03-21 11:34 PM
We bring this back to the Fore just to embarass Strolen. Go to Comment
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Shadoweagle's comment on 2013-09-02 02:37 AM
There can be no score for sub number 1, except a 5. As far as I see it, without this first sub to start this site, there would be no other subs, so this is responsible for all the content within the citadel.

The next quest should totally be for all participants to use this idea seed and expand it however they wish into their own sub. Go to Comment
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Scrasamax's comment on 2011-04-25 10:41 AM
This one time at Dungeon Camp...

LoL Go to Comment
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Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-04-26 08:24 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-01-25 10:54 AM
This is a funny blast from the past. Anyone looking at this and that has been here for any length of time can definitely see the difference in quality that the site has brought. From this to say Regression by Iain... classic stuff.

Remember, everything begins somewhere and nothing is original. Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-03-22 08:09 AM
Sounds like an instalment of an indroductory Keep of the Borderlands module. :) Go to Comment
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Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-04-22 08:16 AM


I think these old subs such as this need to be brought back and possibly be reborn. Write another sub tying them together perhaps.


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Chaosmark's comment on 2007-04-19 10:44 PM
Wulf: Niiiice. Go to Comment
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Pariah's comment on 2006-05-14 09:31 PM
WOW!!! The coughing... Go to Comment
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Murometz's comment on 2011-01-03 04:01 PM


Strolen is too humble to mention that this entire sub also happens to be written in code. Decipher the code and unlock the secret location of the long-lost Templar treasure!



Many have tried over the years...


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axlerowes's comment on 2010-12-31 03:25 PM


I just half to know, what were the changes made in 2005. 



 



But just reading that short paragraph, fills my mouth with the taste of mountain dew, shoots phantom pimple pain under my skin, and reminds me why the basis for a solid good character is a hand crossbow and a long cloak.

 


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valadaar's comment on 2011-04-25 08:54 AM


Basic premise to start from.  Used something similar in my currently defunct PBP - Respite.

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Wulfhere's comment on 2006-11-14 10:14 AM
A blast from the distant past...

Of course, Strolen didn't mention that the ruffians are actually the descendants of the mine's original owner, come to protect their claim...

The villagers actually intended to remake the mine into a temple of evil, dedicated to their secret cult; they are secretly worshippers of Mrrrrorw, Demon Lord of Rabid Housecats...

The dangerous beasts dwelling within the mine are actually Awfully Good "Wink Dogs", that strive to oppose evil even as they make numerous lascivious double-entendres...

And it's not actually a true mine at all, but a natural cavern, filled with valuable crystalline gems sacred to the local dwarves, who originally drove off the ruffians' ancestors to keep them from mining it.

(Let the players get a glance at this, then run the scenario 'stock' and watch them second-guess themselves into complete confusion as they wait for 'the other shoe to drop'!) Go to Comment
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Wulfhere's comment on 2010-03-04 10:28 PM
The first sub on a great site... It deserves some credit just for that. Go to Comment
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