For some reason "... cooked and half eaten farmers strewn about the house" cracked me up. What is wrong with me? :P
I know this is a very short and minimal sub but there is something about it that just gets the wheels churning. So many possible ways this could go.
This seems so uninspired I am not sure what to make of it. The cannibals have no motivation to make them interesting, the farmers have nothing for players to empathize with, it's simply a scene of gore. This post would work better as an idea.
A minor piece, but this could certainly be the hook for a larger adventure: "So you say you found this armor in an Orc hoard, eh? Well, I might be willing to go easy on you if you take care of this little problem I have with the kingdom next door. I can't get involved directly, you understand..."Go to Comment
I liked most of it, with the exception of the very last line. I got a good visual of Huran and his armor, his precious armor. However, I don't think his dying words would be enough to add a lightning strike. Especially dying peacefully, but not all tales need to be tragic.. Solid submission!