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Holy Dissent
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Cheka Man's comment on 2006-03-09 08:07 PM
I like it, it could go either way. Go to Comment
Holy Dissent
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Michael Jotne Slayer's comment on 2011-02-25 08:31 AM


Submission number 23. Old-school.


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Holy Dissent
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-10 05:36 PM
Brilliant hook...It reminds me of a potential episode for the incomparable Hercule Poirot. Leaving the what/who/why/when/where to the reader is refreshing!! Its all I need to let my own imagination take over and figure out the plot. I wish we had more subs like this. A nice hook, a bit of mystery, and THATS IT!! no lengthy essay on the particulars! Go to Comment
Holy Dissent
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2007-10-19 09:28 AM
fixed goofball characters Go to Comment
Holy Dissent
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
valadaar's comment on 2011-04-26 10:55 AM


I agree with the comments - a great short starter sub you can run with!


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Holy Dissent
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Ramhir's comment on 2011-02-25 05:17 PM


A nice, short sub for a GM to incorporate into an on-going campaign. Useful and easily adapted to any system. Thanks.


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Holy Dissent
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
MysticMoon's comment on 2011-02-25 08:41 AM


It is amazing how such a short sub can instantly start the wheels turning. There is just enough detail to take this in so many different directions. When I read this I saw a whole larger plot where the priest is a con man who ran off with the money, yet he is being conned by someone from the shadows who's ultimate goal is to sew total chaos. What other matches could be thrown on this already volatile situation?


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Jiklud's Axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2008-04-25 10:17 PM
It's good. I expected it to be some sort of room-wide antimagic that instantly kills anything that has ever been exposed to magic. You know the kind created by a half-elf half-dark elf half dragon half mermaid etc?

Yeah, I was pleasantly surprised when I read that it only canceled magic in a 5ft diameter. Go to Comment
Jiklud's Axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 02:19 PM
1590 hits, and nobody commented. For shame. Go to Comment
Jiklud's Axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Cheka Man's comment on 2014-07-24 12:18 PM
A nasty gift to give to a mage. Go to Comment
Jiklud's Axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-03-22 12:15 PM
With a little more work, backstory and history and description this may just be a very nice item. Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2003-06-11 03:35 PM
What if Lord Barlow dies before he's able to pay for his wrong? Maybe then you'd have to find the next of kin and make them pay for his crime...? Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Barbarian Horde's comment on 2004-01-26 10:01 PM
isn't this straight from the ravenloft source book? Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
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Strolen's comment on 2006-06-13 05:14 PM
Well, I don't read Ravenloft at all, never have. As you can see by the 2002 date, this was one of my original posts on the site and it was in a notebook long before that. So, whatever, basically. Defending myself to unsubstantiated Horde posts is annoying. If you have a real reference I wish you would show it so I could see what you are even talking about. Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Agar's comment on 2003-01-11 09:13 PM
I like the idea. Maybe the players even get caught up in the trial and could be the only ones spared by the curse if they worked to help the beggar woman. Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-13 04:15 PM
Its comments such as this that make me question commenting or voting until its clerified. Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
valadaar's comment on 2011-04-26 10:44 AM


I think the plot is basic enough that it could come from a hundred places - its nice and simple.  Wrongful death. Curse. Lift Curse.



Now, wrongful death is so common that the story needs to turn on why the beggar woman had such power? Favorite of some god? Was she once a powerful witch fallen on hard times?  Evil is rarely punished, so why now?



 



 



 



 

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Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
PoisonAlchemist's comment on 2011-08-12 01:12 AM


I am a bit curious as to why she cursed the entire city. Is this a large city? Is there a disproportionate number of poorly treated beggars?


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Schaak
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Agar's comment on 2002-11-05 12:20 AM
Having a monopoly on a faster, safer way to travel, I don't imagine he would be very forthcoming about how he's doing what he's doing. "Oh, I just get up in the morning and go whichever way my nose is pointing." He could act as a sort of specalized guide at times, if need or possibly reward were great enough. Go to Comment
Schaak
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Shadow1973's comment on 2005-01-10 10:00 AM
The magical pathways is a plot all on their own.

Would this cart be heavly loaded with items all over or are the neatly packed away in trunks? If this person is seen quite often pulling large objects out of small containers, there just might be some other wizard out there trying to find out how this peddeler is traveling about the lands selling so quickely of just wanting to see what is inside all them trunks. Go to Comment
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